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Reviews for Heidi the Picnicker

By : drbigg
  • From Nacho1sgreat on December 15, 2009
    You should continue on with this it is really good. It could mean a life changing turn for Heidi.

    NACHO OUT!!!!!
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  • From Bishonen on February 10, 2009
    I don't read het much anymore but this caught my eye for some resaon hope you do more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From MarkJoe on February 10, 2009
    That was great it made me feel kinda dirty but that's what was so great about it please do more.
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  • From RAW19 on February 04, 2009
    That girl must have really annoyed you for you to write this. It was interesting.
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  • From Mangafreak on February 03, 2009
    that was pretty dark, i liked it. will there be any more of this story?
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  • From SSjDiizoid on February 03, 2009
    A good length for a fic like this. You described things in good detail, as well. Golds actions, though wrong, felt justified considering Heidis attitude and his own shit luck over his recent events.

    It is interesting that he would not just leave her out as she was once he was done, however. Does he expect her to not report the incident, eventually? I know its merely a story, and not to be taken by real life standards, but it was still a bad decision on his part.
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