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Reviews for A Not So Normal Day For Haruhi Fujioka

By : AviarisSevanthis
  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 26, 2009
    *does happy dance in chair and falls onto the floor*
    I must say, you skillfully recreated the scene between Kyouya and Haruhi from Nekozawa's mansion--which, of course, is one of my favorites--if not my most favorite. As a fan of the manga, that particular scene was one of the few reasons I even watched the anime, and I was always wondering just what it was that Kyouya had been thinking when he walked away from the room that night--so thank you for painting that lovely, lovely picture. As for the rest, it was nice seeing Kyouya all introspective for once, since he truly IS the "Shadow King" most of the time. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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  • From on July 19, 2009
    when is Kyoya going to get his chance? I know that time will bring the shadow king and the 'natural' together but i kinda want this to come out with Haruhi in a different relationship with someone outside of the hostclub. All the aside, i'm hooked on this!
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  • From ANON - Ysi on July 19, 2009
    Whoa! That leaves Kyouya. Now, I really can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 15, 2009
    Oh, I think Tamaki's perfectly in character; it's not that I don't LIKE him, just not for Haruhi, or at least, not him alone (hehe, I'm such a perv).
    Okay, so this chapter...
    I dunno, the sex between the two of them felt kinda, well um, flat. Maybe echoing how she was feeling? That there was something important missing?
    The first scene with the twins was deliciously dirty (I mean, come on--a 3P is great!). The next with her and her therapist was sexy, and her first scene with Honey (while the fantasy wasn't PERSONALLY to my taste [not saying that I didn't like how your wrote it, just that it's not my thing]) was good--and the second one was smokin' hot. And I liked the scene with Mori, the right bit of tenderness (and it seemed a catalyst too, for her getting better--between him and Hunny, that is). Somehow the scene with The King just fell a bit short...empty?
    Idk, this is just my own opinion (I hope I didn't offend you) and I am enjoying this fic a great deal.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 11, 2009
    Gah! *chokes and flails about*...
    Okay, I'm better now...so anyway, before my brains melts down any more, the chapter...(wow, that's a lot of ellipses, even for me)
    I loved Kyouya's song, and how he was looking at her, and how he's in complete denial about his feelings for Haruhi. Tamaki leading her off and his little convo in the alley, however, just makes me want to smack the blond idiot. He KNOWS she had a disorder, and if I recall (correct me if I'm wrong) he agreed (reluctantly) when the rest of the Host Club decided to show their, um, support. I mean, he's funny and all, with all the pouting he does, but he's showing himself to be a bit TOO selfish. (This is in no way criticism for your characterization, mind you--you write your characters beautifully). I suppose I'm showing myself to be a bit too much of a Kyouya fangirl, but Tamaki's attitude grates on my nerves. Either realize (and admit) your undying love to Haruhi, of back off--he's only going to make the poor girl feel bad in the end.
    *sighs* sorry, I'm just not liking the King too much right now. And Kyouya needs a good, swift smack upside the head for not going after what he wants (though maybe you're saving the best for last?)
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  • From ANON - Muzixfox on July 10, 2009
    I actually really like this story. This is one of my favorite Ouran on this site. I was worried a bit at the beginning, since I really though Haruhi was a bit out of character. But for some reason, after allowing the reader to see a hint of the future, I have so much faith in this story. (I personally think it will be Kyoyo, but I am always convinced it is Kyoyo). Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Ysi on July 06, 2009
    Thanks for the link. I'd forgotten how ridiculously funny Tamaki is. Love the anime ;) and what's this Kyoya sings? Can't wait to see what he says.
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  • From ANON - Ysi on July 06, 2009
    I did? I hadn't realized that I 'ruled out' Tamaki. I like Tamaki's character, don't get me wrong, but I prefer Kyouya's evil-genius-but-cool persona and Hikaru's angsty rebel. (Hint hint!) Either way I'm enjoying this so far. And you do love to torture and draw it out. Am I to keep guessing who she marries in the end? ;) keep em coming!
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 04, 2009
    *does happy dance in chair* OOh! Poor Haruhi--does she really think Kyouya doesn't love her? I can't hardly wait for the next chapter (Kyouya singing? This will be interesting).
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 02, 2009
    Aww, that was really cute. I did go back and reread all the previous chapters though, just to bring myself back up to speed and all. I really like how you wrote the previous two chapters without sex (though I love your sex scenes, don't get me wrong) and allow the reader to kinda catch their breath. So glad you have a livejournal now (I added you, I hope you don't mind--gypsygrrl420) since I'm on there quite often of late. Can't wait for the next chapter, and hope you're having a lovely summer.
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  • From ANON - Tiramisu on July 02, 2009
    Woot!! I love your writing....When the next chappy comes out I'll send you cybercookies...(It's the best I can do...) I like pretty much everyone in Ouran - I'm looking forward to reading who Haruhi ends up with!!
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  • From on June 19, 2009
    i loved it for one thing, but im alittle confused to who she married? did i miss something *fustration*
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  • From SereneLies on June 13, 2009
    *sobs* that was sooooooooooooooooooooooo depressing... seriously, I started welling up and the absolute emotion in everyone. AWESOME JOB *sniffle* onto the next chapter

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  • From SereneLies on June 12, 2009
    I am enjoying it so far but just to be clear, no one knows she is a girl??? O.o oh dear, what a shock that will be
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  • From ANON - Ysi on June 01, 2009
    OOH! Can't wait! Will the groom be Hikaru or Kyouya? ;)
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