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Reviews for When hearts Collide

By : inuyoukai8
  • From ANON - Tricia1224 (logged out) on July 08, 2010
    I just finished reading this story. It is amazing. I enjoy how you write you own characters and make them a believable character in the story. I enjoy your work. I look forward to seeing what else you write.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2010
    I would love it if you did a sequel!!!! Please write one, I want more Kanda and Aleia. This is possibly one of the best fanfics i've ever read. I had been looking for a good non-yaoi Kanda story for soooo long and yours was just absolutely amazing! So long story short I am dying for a sequel, I think it would be interesting if they had kids,I always wondered what Kanda would be like as a father.
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 31, 2009
    I just got finished reading your story, and I have to say I'm really impressed. In any other situation I would probably think of Aleia being a Mary-sue, but the way you wrote this story and weaved the emotions into it, it made Aleia a very interesting character.

    I loved the way you presented each character also. None of the characters seemed OOC, and I absolutely loved the way you portrayed Tyki Mikk. I never thought of him being completely heartless, so it was nice to see him still sadistic, but not entirely evil.

    I found Kanda's past in this story very original. You expained it very well throughout the story, and Kyria was a very interesting character.

    I didn't expect the whole AllenxLenaleexLavi threesome in there, but it added to the story. The sex scenes were written very well, and the were portrayed fantastically. As were the other sex scenes.

    Overall your story was a very enticing read, and very well written.
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  • From ANON - Lathya on September 17, 2009
    It's been five months since your last update? Are you planning to update it, or is it on hiatus? It's killing me! T_T Please update soon

    Ja mata
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  • From ANON - kjcalic on August 06, 2009
    Of the many fanfics I have read (and the few that have been...'R' rated) I have to say this is probably one of the best I have ever read. Your characters, though already created by someone else, are your own--they're very believable, and that is something that is critical when writing any type of fiction. Your plot moves at a good pace--not like some fics where it's 'bing-bang-boom'--it flows perfectly. And your imagery is done very well; it's never too overwhelming, but it satisfies nonetheless. It's humorous too, but not a complete comedy. It's hard to take things seriously when everything's comedic, but I like the sense of humour you write with.
    Oh!! And let's not forget the infamous love scenes!! You are a master at it, I swear. You capture the event very well, both the physical and the emotional parts of it.
    I really hope I come on here soon and see a chapter 15 for this story, I'm so excited to see where you take this!
    Good job, and keep doing what you're doing!!!
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  • From ANON - Koyuki on May 24, 2009
    Your story is totally awesome! I love how you did the AllenxLenaxLavi love triangle and made Aleia-san such a fun character. Hope to see how the next chapter goes. (btw, great job on the 'Aleia dying' part of the story, I thought you were actually going to kill her. O.o' XD)
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