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Reviews for Takato S.O.S

By : penumbra
  • From Subhogue on December 08, 2017

    Much more plz. Plz more.


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  • From ANON - Bob on February 13, 2013
    Can you do a female reamon
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  • From Siefer on June 15, 2012
    I really like this story and hope to see more of it.
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  • From Takai153 on November 26, 2010
    Nice story, its funny and hot as hell! I can't wait to see who else Takato is going to get. I'm hoping for Ruki, his teacher, and at least one female digimon (Renamon, Angewomon, LadyDevimon, Rosemon, and Sakuyamon are favorites). Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
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  • From Groeno101 on November 15, 2010
    “Angel’s sang” Exactly what I felt when this updated.
    ‘Takato, did you bring enough magical jizz for the entire class?’ ‘No Ma’am just enough for Juri.’
    The build up and the sex scene were great. I could really feel the tension Takato was feeling. “It’s like holding yourself from sneezing, just makes it bigger when you finally lose it” Exactly, dead on, couldn’t agree more. When she pinned him right before.. and the blowjob.. explosive!
    I’m excited to see just how far charming elixir can go in making enhancements to girls. If it keeps going Takato will never be able to resist, and neither will I! Seriously, this is great. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next. Good luck with your next chapter!

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  • From Cystematic on November 14, 2010
    It...It just keeps getting better(that's what she said)! Seriously, this just made my day. It's always nice to have a good laugh(or a few dozen)first thing in the morning. Yes, it's ridiculous to be making so much noise on a Sunday morning, but the neighbors sleep too much as it is(besides, they've already got two-dozen reasons to hate me, so what's one more?).

    P.S. Once again, had to make a new account, but I got my original username back!


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  • From Mic123 on October 26, 2010
    man I want more, keep it up
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  • From Groeno101 on August 25, 2010
    Love this story! The pacing and grammar are good and Takato's reaction to having his body changed into a horny sex machine I think is a pretty good characterization of him.

    I particularly like the body modification element that Lingumon provides. It is similar to an idea I once had. With there being so much porn and erotic material on the net that if ,while in the digital world, Takato, Rika, or Juri got sucked into a data stream that's transfering some of that porn data, and the data would write itself on them in the stream alter their bodies. But in this story, Lingumon is pretty much that, but personified as a digimon, which allows for development and story progression and makes the idea work less as a manufactured excuse to just put the tamers in an erotic situation, while still putting them in erotic situations. lol

    Having Juri's breasts grow because of a bukkake was AWESOME. I know I've seen the whole "drinking cum will make a girl's breasts grow" in a few hentai doujins, but this is the first time I think I've seen it in fan fiction so kudos to you. Due to the roll that Lingumon plays it works PERFECTLY for making "improvements" on the girls. Personally I'm a fan of bukkake so I love this idea and it would be awesome to see it used more ,hopefully extensively.

    Also, Rika is my favorite digimon girl so I'm praying that you decide to get her involved too.

    Would love to see this story continued to it's end, that is when and if you do decide to continue.
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  • From on April 13, 2010
    Yes. Just YES. To what, I haven't the slightest. But yes anyway. Rarely do I encounter a story that has an awesome balance of eroticism and humor(that's actually funny), and is well-written. Usually, it's just braindead scenarios that inevitably lead to sexings, punctuated by occasional and very lame attempts at humor, and seasoned with dialogue fit for a SyFy Channel Original Movie.

    For actually being good at what you do, I applaud you. Now, to be fair, it's not perfect(what is?). There are several instances I found where a comma was needed, but wasn't present. However, even though I'm a Grammar Nazi of the highest order, I never found myself caring about any kind of "flaw" in the writing. Normally, when I read a story, I just read it for what it is the first time around. Then, if I feel the urge, I'll read it again from a technical standpoint to examine it.

    Well, I've read this story about seven times, and not once did I do it to pick out errors. Once again, I must commend you for writing this refreshing change of pace from the usual shit that I find on the web.

    P.S. - I'm sure you can tell by the penname, but just in case, I am "Cyst". Or, at least, I was. Someone seems to have hacked into my old account and changed my password, so I decided to just create a new one.
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  • From on January 24, 2010
    Fucking...Awesome! Seriously, I found something that made me laugh about every ten seconds! It's well written, has an original plotline, it's funny as well, and there's gonna be sexings next chapter! What more could a reader possibly ask for?

    I have to admit, I thought this fic was going to be like so many other great stories and die before it ever really got off the ground. But I'm glad to see I was wrong.
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  • From dexia on November 13, 2009
    great start, looks like a pretty interesting plot and hope I to see more...
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  • From on June 14, 2009
    I must say, this is a pretty good story. Not really much else to say, since most everything ranges from "decent enough" to "excellent". I just hope it continues, I'm dying to know what's going to happen next!
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