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Reviews for Broken Knight

By : mystphoenix
  • From ANON - BlackKnight on February 21, 2015
    This is truly very interesting to read; I would like to read more of Lelouch and Suzaku smut fanfics; with Lelouch being raped or even willingly selling his body
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  • From gaara89 on September 24, 2009
    I liked everything up until they pissed all ovver him. You should probably put a warning in the summary that that happens. It was kind of off-putting.
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  • From Bligmeister on April 21, 2009
    I think I love you... like... more than a little bit. You're amazing. I've never read any sort of smut that's actually this coherant and brilliant while still being hot. I didn't actually realize that this, Prince and Prize Kiss were written by the same person until you mentioned it... but wow. I love Prize Kiss, I keep coming back here praying that it's been updated... but these one shots are definately an awesome consolation prize.

    I'd LOVE it, by the way, if you had Suzaku join the Knights. You're amazing enough to pull it off IC rather than having him randomly being all like... "YAY, KNIGHTS ROOL" or something silly as such. I absolutely adore your characterization of Suzaku... with Lelouch wearing the metaphoric pants while they're not in bed and Suzaku dominating the shit out of him while they are, and then reverting back to puppy-dog format after. Again... best smut writer I've ever read.

    Just... to illustrate my point, I actually made this account for the sole purpose of reviewing your stuff.

    Cheers!

    -Bligy
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  • From Lilyoda44 on April 20, 2009
    I didn't expect you to upload a story so soon. Suzaku seems less than of a slut than Lelouch but I enjoyed the story. Maybe its because Suzakus is less vocal than Lelouch. Now I keep getting images in my head of Suzaku and Lelouch getting gang banged together, wow this is what reading fanfiction does to me. But, I like your story good job! What I noticed in both stories is that you like them getting peed on. Thats okay to me but its not really my cup of tea. I kinda cringed at that part but I kept reading. I hope you update Prize Kiss soon! I don't know what you will do with the road blocks but maybe making Suzaku join the Black Knights would be interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I am a sucker for handcuffs/bondage. Anyway good job and I hope to read more of your stories soon!
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