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Reviews for Kiss and Make Up

By : tsutsuji
  • From ANON - RaineArilan on July 15, 2009
    Hmmm. Okay, first things first, I really liked it. The plot idea, the pairing, the way it was played out was all great. I loved the line "Actually, he was hoping Murata had expected to be found by a certain persistent and clever spy," and all the other ones just like it that make both of the characters pop off the page. You really do get them very well in terms of their motivations. I totally love Yozak's constant ongoing hope that he quashes with "but that couldn't be what Murata meant. It couldn't be on purpose" That was absolutely adorable.
    On the other hand, something struck me as awkward the whole time I was reading it. I don't know if I can quite put my finger on it. A couple of times the dialogue sounded a little stilted. Eh. I don't know. But - and I am not just saying this - I do really like it. I could see the whole thing playing out in my head. Very nice.
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