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Reviews for The Best Present

By : libek
  • From ArchangelM127 on August 01, 2009
    At first, I couldn't stop laughing! You've broken Lelouch's character six ways from Sunday, but I think you've nailed everyone else perfectly. Especially poor Suzaku. I can honestly see Kaguya doing something like this and enjoying the heck out of it (although I would have expected Zero to be the victim). At the end, I found that I'd become extremely aroused without even realizing it. Too bad that Suzaku (presumably) gets released; I wouldn't mind reading about more playtime for Kaguya. ^_^

    Your writing is excellent from a technical point of view; good spelling and grammar. Also, as a fellow author I must say that there were a number of phrases that I found poetic--even inspired. One that sticks in my memory is "her greedy little hips." Superb.

    You should write more het fic. I may write WAFF, but I enjoy reading good kink, especially bondage. ;)
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