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Reviews for The Two Ranmas

By : Animedevildog
  • From ANON - anon on May 04, 2016
    "that's easy, call me Ranko"

    Complete and utter BS. the Ranko name was never anything Ranma cared about, it was just a name he came up at the spur of the moment to hide from his mother. But as such he actually disliked the name since it was a fake name he had created in order to hide from his mom. Now imagine a Ranma that can't turn back into a guy -- this type of Ranma would be extremely pissed off and upset... this type of Ranma would never EVER want to be called anything other than "Ranma".

    Still there is a way to fix this.

    Just start the 3rd chapter woiith female Ranma saying:

    "...Or that is what I would call myself if I was an idiot!! The hell I'm changing my name you assholes! I'm Saotome Ranma! If you have a problem with that, go change your name yourself you penis equipped piece of crap!"

    ^or something like that.
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  • From ANON - anonanger on September 30, 2014
    I gave the story a 1+ because you killed Happosai for no reason at all and worse, because the female Ranma called herself "Ranko". If not for those two things I would probably have given it a 5+... in fact the killing of Happosai only brought it down by one point so if you hadn't used the Ranko name and still killed Happosai, the story would have gotten 4+ from me.
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  • From scifinut64 on January 04, 2010
    this is a real good story so far, am looking forward to more chapters

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2009
    finally someone wrote a ranma/ranko story i been waiting for one of these. i hope you continue writing this its great ^^
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  • From WootMannen on September 22, 2009
    I like what I see, so far. Keep up the good work.
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  • From TaiKhanA on September 08, 2009
    Oh yeah, almost forgot...

    As for a _first_ indication of lustful behavior between the two? In the furo the following morning would seem more in keeping with the pace of things, especially if you do have them sleep (not easily) apart the first night. Neither would really give it much thought at first and, if you wish to follow the examples of all the other fics like this, they could be interrupted before they actually go too far (personally, just once, I'd like to see them actually get to the doing the deed, or at least well into it, before they're interrupted or caught).
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  • From TaiKhanA on September 08, 2009
    Look for the fics "Nullification" and "Nullifier 122", they should give a basic idea of how I would expect Ranma to react. There are other similar fics out there using this idea of splitting Ranma into male and female halves.

    As for Nabiki's OOC behavior, you might back that off to simply consoling 'Ranko' that all is not lost outwardly, while inwardly having some more personal thoughts that show she isn't as uncaring as she's tried to portray in the past. Perhaps even a mild 'crush' on both of Ranma's forms, but not all that willing to get deeply involved in Ranma's chaotic life. That and, like the rest of her family, save Akane, she's convinced herself that Ranma and Akane do love each other(Personally, I don't buy that bullshit at all, they just _want_ to believe it as it justifies the pure hell they've all put the two through).

    As for Soun and Genma's OOC behavior. The 'uniting of the schools' has _always_ been their driving goal, at the expense of all else (save their own comfort and lives).

    As for Akane (a character I admit to having no fondness for), it would be expected for her to offer, if not insist, that 'Ranko' sleep somewhere other than with Ranma (like on a futon in her room, where she can keep an eye on the possible soul-sucking doppelganger (Akane would not have fond memories of the first time Happosai pulled this kind of stunt)). As for Ranma, Akane wouldn't be very sympathetic now that he's been freed of one the weaknesses (the Jusenkyo curse) that she often exploits to keep the 'pervered jerk' in line (i.e. under her thumb).
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  • From TaiKhanA on September 08, 2009
    This second chapter still has the male Ranma being out-of-character, with his disregard for being free of the Jusenkyo curse. Female Ranma, however, would be dwelling on the possibility of never being male again. Unless you're having Akane acknowledging her feelings for Ranma, there's no way she'd be sleeping next to male Ranma. Not a chance in hell. And without explaining Nabiki's change in character to a caring individual, it's not likely she'd be sleeping with them either.

    You've got a good basis for a story here, but without a great deal more explanation for the alterations in the characters' behaviors it's not going to work very well. I'd recommend sitting down and reconsidering their behavior, and either get them back to canon behavior or explain why they're acting so unexpectedly different.
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  • From TaiKhanA on September 08, 2009
    Ranma seems extremely out-of-character here. He's finally free of the curse, or so it seems, and yet he's behaving as if it's the end of the world. And thinking of 'seppuku'? The female Ranma _might_ think about it, but the male Ranma should have actually considered himself safer now that he could no longer turn into a girl. And even at her worst, Happosai should not have held Akane's threats in anything other than total contempt. As for Happosai's demise...it would have been far more believable for the female Ranma to have killed Happosai in a rage than Genma. And Soun would have used the separation as an excuse to once again force through a marriage attempt.
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