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Reviews for The Move

By : Ameban
  • From Ghotha00 on October 26, 2009
    Hay, just saw your last installment of our story!!!

    It was hilarious!!! Made me crawl for a while!!! It was so funny!!!
    Not much happening in this episode except zelgadis seemed to have caught the hint and some of the members in the party as well.

    Looking forward for more of this...
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  • From Ghotha00 on October 17, 2009
    I don't know how people have not reviewed this story...

    You have caught the essence of the characters and the way you make them act is according to their personalities. You did a good job keeping them in character.

    The way you narrate the story taking into consideration the thoughts of the players is very insightful, adds more depth to the characters.

    I am looking forward to see more of this story, all in all the best i've read so far. No exageration...

    Ya tu sabe, keep up the good work...
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