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Reviews for Goodbye

By : Imsadistic
  • From Scorpinac on February 14, 2010
    Umm, you haven't forgotten about this one, have you? It's been a whole month since the last update...
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  • From Scorpinac on January 13, 2010
    Aww, that was sweet the way it got to Shampoo. Now, if they can just get him comfortable enough to do it for real! And now that we've seen this would be Kasumi-usurper, the game is on! Well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on January 12, 2010
    WOW! two stories updated in one day! I like how you brought out this side of Ryoga. It reminds me of when I was a Corporal in the Marine Corps teaching Marines how to shoot. (I know, entirely differend circumstances, but his actions and such is what did it)
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  • From Scorpinac on January 09, 2010
    Interesting how everyone is rallying to help Tofu. And I don't mind you taking my idea, that's why I suggested it. That's what it was there for. Though the idea of diminutive Kin aggressively jumping Ono Sr. is quite the image. :) Well, until chapter 4, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on January 08, 2010
    I are saddest. You still cannot update on the weekends. I assume that is because you have things which occupy your time at that point. Oh well... I guess I'll just sit here all alone with nothing to read untill Monday... T_T

    Ok, ignore the pitty trip, it was a joke. I like where you seem to be taking this. Especially how you explained the Good Dr.'s behavior whenever he is around Kasumi. I am suprised that you did not have Ranmachan also dating him. Then again, with the three that you have lined up, it could get interesting. Especially with how psychotic Kodachi can get. Then again, you have shown a side to her that the anime never did let us see.

    I'm looking forward to Monday and Chapter 4!
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  • From Scorpinac on January 08, 2010
    Ah, poor pathetic Tofu. Does he still have a chance to win the girl?! What he really needs to do is have a talk with his mother about his father, and thus learn how he managed to push through the "idiot barrier" as he calls it. Oh, well. Until chapter 3, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on January 07, 2010
    So tragic! She has the same feelings for him, but neither seems able to tell to tell the other...
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  • From Scorpinac on January 07, 2010
    Ooh, poor Tofu! Interesting start, I must say. I look forward to more. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on January 06, 2010
    An excellent beginning. I sense that there could be a lot of angst within this one. I look forward to seeing where you go with this one.
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