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Reviews for Incubus

By : SisterWicked
  • From fantasyfabricator on June 24, 2011
    This is such a well thought out AU for these two characters. It's a really great pairing and although I noticed the date on this was rather far back I have this hope that you might dig this out, dust it off and maybe complete it. I'm dying of curiosity...the story is addictive and so very unique. I applaud your skills with the written(typed?) word and definitely play to follow your works be they fanfiction or otherwise if I can find them.

    As far as a critique goes, I was so caught up in the flow of your writing and your interpretation of the personalities of Lavi and Tyki that I haven't noticed anything that I'd offer any advice on...well none that I can remember after such steamy scenes! Seriously though, this is really good work and it's seems to me that you put a great deal of thought into plot and character development which is such a refreshing change from the pure smut found here at AFF because to me, AFF doesn't mean only sexual situations. It's a place where themes that really only an adult would understand and relate to can be found...and yes, your work as it's share of the smexy stuff but it has solid form in the shape of characters we can identify with or at the very least sympathize with.

    Thank you for sharing this with the AFF community. Such quality work is a blessing!
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  • From ANON - Helen Jones on August 10, 2010
    This is the best Lucky story I ,have read, yet. I've read most of your stories, and man they are good please keep up the awesome-ish work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sull on May 12, 2010
    I'm not sure how long it's been since you even thought to look at this story, but I read it and as an author myself, I know that reviews are usually wanted and welcome. I absolutely adore the role reversal between Lavi and Tyki - I'm not usually a fan of AU, but the fact that the personification of pleasure shifted from Tyki to Lavi is such an... intriguing idea and watching it play out so far has been delicious. I would say that's been my favorite part of the whole thing. (Not to mention, you write gorgeous sex scenes, and I truly enjoy how you manage to mix the emotional with the physical, rather than just writing... porn, for instance.) I would of course love to see more, but if that doesn't come, this was still enjoyable to read.
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  • From ANON - Doll on January 14, 2010
    I love this story
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