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Reviews for The Proposal

By : Imsadistic
  • From Scorpinac on February 09, 2010
    Ah, but is this the end? At least Mousse is taking things well, that's something, anyway. And Shampoo is still allowing Mousse to part of the girl's lives, so that's good. Well, until next chapter, if there is one. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on February 08, 2010
    I am guessing that this was the final chapter. (5) I loved your story. It really came out well. Just the right touch of lemon and love.
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  • From Scorpinac on February 06, 2010
    Of course, I've been wrong before... Mousse might want to make sure those girls are actually his before confronting Shampoo, and alas poor Nabiki, she married a blank shooter, darn! Somehow I sense that just maybe she'll wind up with Mousse after all, the way this is going. Well, until chapter 5, most likely on Monday, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on February 05, 2010
    Jesus... I do not think I have ever seen two people who would have made the perfect couple. It is unfortunate that they have yet to realize that fact, and went on to marry those whom they craved, yet were totally wrong for them.

    Maybe Garth rooks was right with the song Unanswered Prayers...
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  • From Scorpinac on February 05, 2010
    Poor Mousse, loosing his sister like that. He has my sympathies. At least he's finally making headway with Shampoo, and Ranma and Akane got together. Apparetnly, though, Kuno is not so secretly still stuck on Akane, but I imagine the next chapter will maybe end that. Well, until then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on February 04, 2010
    Damn... your stories just keep getting better and better. Could it be that Shampoo is gonna finally realize just how good a man Mousse is?
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  • From Scorpinac on February 04, 2010
    Well, can't say I was expecting you to continue this one, but interesting all the same. I look forward to seeing what all comes of this. Until next chapter, or fic, then. Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on February 03, 2010
    Om... that should have been "Mousse" and NOT "Shampoo... -_-;
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  • From Animedevildog on February 03, 2010
    This one definitely has a different twist on Shampoo than you usually see in a fanfic. I like it. I like this style as well. It's raw and so truthful.
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  • From Scorpinac on February 02, 2010
    Mousse x Nabiki? That's a rare coupling. Not badly done, though. What's next, Mousse banging Kasumi? Oh, well. Until next time, preferably the finale of "Captured", then(am I being a nudge?). Laters.
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  • From Animedevildog on February 01, 2010
    DAMN! That was hot! I always pictured Nabiki as one who would fuck like a rabid weasel in heat!
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