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Reviews for The Making of Something Different

By : sharingan154
  • From revan193 on October 01, 2012
    Mmmmh, this fic is very interesting, I hope to see a new chapter one day! :)

    I'm already wondering who will be the next "victim" of Keitaro? Motoko? Or maybe Shinobu?
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  • From PrincessKooh on July 07, 2012
    Awesome job. Hope ta see more soon :D
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  • From Odinson83 on December 24, 2011
    Great story. Please continue.
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  • From Tentai21 on January 21, 2011
    Love the story and hope to see more and wondered something like who else will are horny hero get to next and how big has he gotten as he is bound to have stretched motoko out.
    That and to prove that he has these powers maybe have her get pregnant with twins or more. that and will su be pregnant and also who else.
    tha tand will shinobu and her friend nymo becoming in soon same with the other girls.

    that and the possibly worst thing i could think of to prove his powers word be to have motoko do an animal and pecome pregnant with the animal offspring and quicken the birth of it.

    heck could you msg me and have a talk as i would like to do something and would rather it be private okay.

    but great story and hope to see what you do next.
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  • From ANON - lemonjuicer on August 02, 2010
    Great stuff..would be interesting to see Keitaro, Suu and Motoko get the other girls..Kitsune and Mutsumi would be a great addition. Will Motoko now be his loyal partner? Staying tuned for more!
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  • From sanakito on July 20, 2010
    nice
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  • From ANON - KK on July 10, 2010
    Hot piece of work, do continue. Can't wait to see how Keitaro gets with the other girls especially the three endowed girls IMHO: Mutsumi, Kitsune and Naru. Keitaro's character should make himself boosted more in strength, stamina and speed though. Keep it up!
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  • From suicune132 on July 01, 2010
    This is really a great story and i would like to read more. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - LukasAngelis on May 15, 2010
    Please you must write more!
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  • From ANON - YamiAmarillo on May 05, 2010
    Very nice LH story you have here. It's interesting to see Keitaro have this type of power. Shinobu should be the next girl for keitaro followed by Mutsumi. Naru and Kitsune should be last to get some of Kei because of all the shit they put him through. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From juanjoseso on April 19, 2010
    hot start lucky keitaro he will get more girls that way
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  • From ninesenshi on April 01, 2010
    Well, despite the ridiculous premise, I think you may have written the perfect Love Hina fic. Most of these just get bizarre, or completely bogged down in the relationships and picking one girl or some other nonsense. Here you have an omnipotent Keitaro just doing every girl in the place. Sounds about fair. Hope to see more.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From naruto86 on March 17, 2010
    Awesome story and I hope you add the girl Priestess to his harem, please continue!!!
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  • From naruto86 on March 17, 2010
    Finally I was really afraid that this wouldn't be continued, please continue updating I really like this story!!!!
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  • From darthme1011 on March 17, 2010
    Very nice to have you back I look forward to new stuff from you
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