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Reviews for Seducing West

By : mykonosparadise
  • From ANON - Cyan on March 06, 2011
    I'm guessing that you are editing the story a little from the first posting. I really liked it but im sure any changes will simply improve the chapters. I noticed you changed some of the wording, a little curios; what made you want to edit?
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  • From karukumi2pixiv on May 11, 2010
    oh my fuck!!! this was awesome!!!!... it's a pitty that you can't FAV+(favorite) fanfics on adultfanfiction....

    i jizzed in my pants when i read this part:

    *******quote from fanfic:

    -"And that stupid Feliciano," Gilbert began, knowing which words will irritate Ludwig the most, "He wants you so much- wet as a girl every time he sees you, West…" He didn't pay attention to his choice of words anymore, "But, unlike me, he doesn't even know what he wants, that brat… He wants a macho, yet someone who will be gentle with him. He wishes to be independent, yet he wants someone to look after him every time he makes something wrong." Gilbert interrupted his derision, sliding his free hand over the other's chest again, slowly, "I want you as you are, yet I don't ask for anything in return, Bruder."***********

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    i love Seme Ludwig with Uke Prussia.... and i especially loved the way you "portrayed" Gilbert, as cuddly and childish and jealous over ludwig....

    ....Do you by any chance have a DeviantArt account?... (www . deviantart . com)

    i'd love to make some fanart based on this.... my account is "http: //karu-kumi-2.deviantart. com/"....

    i'd love to know if you have an account there with your fanfiction or art.... i'm very good at drawing and CG if you ever want something like a drawing about ludwig/gilbert, or even do something together... almost all of my R-18 drawings can't be posted on Deviantart though.... got banned a couple of times before... lol.... but if you want to, i could show you some of my R-18 works....

    thanks for the amazing fic

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  • From ANON - c on April 23, 2010
    wow, i really love this story. I was pretty much overcome with joy when i saw you had updated it. I am major germcest fan lol and no worries i grew up with a mixture of spanish, german, and english; languages can be wierd
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  • From ANON - Amanda on April 19, 2010
    Yay! It's nice to see Prussia get what he wants >:) Ahh, I was so very excited when I saw this story was updated, and you didn't disappoint. Unlike with most stories on here I found myself being drawn in not only by the promise of sweet, delicious yaoi (yes, I'm a perv) but there was also actually a plot. A good one, at that.

    You say English isn't your first language? You could have fooled me, you write very, very well. Better than some native speakers, actually.

    I would love to see more stories from you, 'adult' or otherwise.
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  • From Saka on April 18, 2010
    YUM! Haha! They must continue nights like that! (Though the guards may wonder what he HELL is going on for a lil bit- though they should catch on ^_~ )

    Anyways nice NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE chapter! And I'll totally be watching for more from you!
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  • From Saka on April 14, 2010
    Oh! I like this story. I'd love to see the next chapter for sure!
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  • From ANON - Cassias on April 09, 2010
    Deal. I love the plot. The slight Italy bashing is always a favorite. I would like to thank you for writing this story, and hope to see the last installment soon, yes?
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  • From ANON - Amanda on April 01, 2010
    Ha, I enjoy this story. Gilbo's wackyness never ceases to amuse me. I agree with you that Italy's a bit out of character here, but I can see how it's important to the story for him to be that way. Everyone else seems pretty well in character, can't wait for the third installment :D
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