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Reviews for White Chocolate

By : HarukasLoveChild
  • From Lilitany on April 14, 2011
    Seriously, this entire story is fantastic. Please continue it! It's great! You're really such a good writer, and it's rare to find a story in this genre with such depth and mystery. Wow. Just wow.
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  • From ANON - PorcelainJester on April 10, 2010
    More please. This is adorable. And I'm dying to know what happens next, and what's in those letters... gah. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sleet on April 09, 2010
    First off, I love the additions of all of the game references, and I think you should add some more obscure ones, to games that perhaps not many people have heard of, seeing as Matt is an avid gamer.
    It's a very believable story, and the character's personality's are spot on.
    One thing though, I suggest, if you're writing in the first person, stick to one PoV, placing an author's note telling you that the PoV has changed makes the story seem a little clunky.
    Overall, fantastic, I'm bookmarking this for when you update.
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