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Reviews for Hustler

By : IncessantDarkness29
  • From karahammer on November 16, 2010
    Aww... The ending was so cute and the way described the sex was so HOT!!!
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  • From lotuspromises on November 12, 2010
    I liked it. I'm generally not much for AU fics as it's usually just an excuse to have the canon boys I like wildly OOC. However! Hustler was awesome. I liked that despite having Hibari sick, he didn't degenerate into whiny and/or whimpy, and was still a violent jerk. Kudos!

    And the smut was hot. I usually like Muku on top, but, for the fic it seemed to work really well. Awesome!
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  • From EllieRamsey on June 24, 2010
    I’m so sorry it’s taken a while to leave a review, I loved this so much I wanted to make sure I did it right! I'm not even sure the review is going to do it justice, there is so much I could say!

    This is brilliant in so many ways. First off, I adore the characterisation. Both Hibari and Mukuro are perfectly as how I imagine them, both of them hard and uncompromising, determined to get what they want in their own ways, but Hibari more the silent type and Mukuro with a playful, irreverent side which I think you describe really well. The dynamic between them is just right, neither properly dominating the other, but both of them trying to. I think the way you go beyond their surfaces too, giving both of them a real dimensional depth through their dialogue and actions (Hibari holding Mukuro’s hands down while he kissed him for instance) is also gorgeous. You have managed to give them motivation and complexity and brought it out really effectively! I think if I wasn’t already in love with them both, I would be now.

    I also love the one liners– Mukuro feeling distinctly dirty, being hit with a frying pan or being surprised that Hibari knows how to text – made me grin in places :D. You tell the story and create the tension incredibly well, not just jumping straight into the action, but really controlling the pace and the build up, and allowing the whole story to develop so when it does happen it is SO HOT! Every. Last. Millimetre. OMG!!!

    I definitely think you are a very good writer in general, the short scenes at the beginning for instance, really work and the pace is excellent. Overall, I also think this is very clever, a lot of thought and effort has gone into making this much more than just a standard fic, and it really shows.

    I can not wait to read what you write next!

    Now... about this Hibari x Mukuro x Gokudera fic..... ;)

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  • From ANON - Shinigami Twin 04 on June 08, 2010
    How cute!!!! Kawaii!!!

    Mukuro owns Hibari's heart!! Awww....

    Hopefully I see more of this lovely work in the future.

    Oh, and for your notice: The symbols you use for a scene breaker don't translate into aff.net. So you may want to come up with something different. Some sort of glitch there. Don't know what.

    But good work! Cute idea! I really like.

    Only thing I take this will be 6918... not a big fan... (prefer `1869) But what can you do. And besides, this is AU so what does it matter!

    Good job Amano on making all AUs officially viable in the realm of KHR so they are AU but not! lolz... nice Lost way of doing things.

    Sincerest,
    Shinigami Twin 04
    (Quatre Raberba Winner)
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  • From EllieRamsey on June 06, 2010
    Oh my, this is delicious! It’s such a clever idea, I mean poor Hibari (when his heart stopped I think mind did too), but he is still so gorgeous and bad-ass. I can definitely see him acting like this in this situation and he is NOT going to like being indebted to Mukuro at all, lol! And I love the way you have portrayed Mukuro too, giving him proper depth and complexity, beneath the smiles and sort of mocking and flippant exterior, he comes across as really dangerous, deadly serious and unpredictable. Incredibly sexy, and I can’t wait for Part 2 x
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  • From ANON - N on June 06, 2010
    Yeah, this rocks. I hope part two is soon? :)

    N
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  • From phoenix682 on June 05, 2010

    wow, amazing, really enjoyed this story and looking forward to the next part.
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