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Reviews for Rival passion

By : sainmoth14
  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2011
    Oh man, I love the whole idea of this fic, how you write it that Ash and Paul actually have a secret relationship going on without either Brock or Dawn knowing and that Paul's cold shoulder towards him is actually just an act. Having Brock in the mix, both conflicted and at the same time enjoying what he saw was hilarious too. And the ending was awesome. I liked this fic a lot.
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