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Reviews for Snow White Queen

By : Heartstarmagick
  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 16, 2016
    I think that with L thinking his awake that before Light rolls over Light asks " Are you ok" using Light real Voice; but when Light rolls over to face L, He has Beyond face. B asks "L are u afraid of me." L says "No" B anwser wiht "Yes, you are, that's why you won't Let that PRETTY LITTLE BOY IN YOUR (B wispers) sweet little, little (B YELLS) HEART, YOUR ALSO AFRAID THAT I'LL DO THIS." And just before B stabes L, he wakes up and yells"NO." Light asks "Is this why you don't sleep." L anwsers "Yes, Light, I do LOVE you; but I don't think I'm ready to be toughed in that kind of way, in the way you look at me kind of way, that you do, I've seen the way look at me." Light looks at L for a minite then says "I understand." then kisses L lips stays that way for a seacted, pulls away, to have L graib Lights shirt, pulls him into a rugher kiss. Light pushes L back ; but is holding onto L shoulders, Light says "No, right now your hurting if we go any farther, with you hurting, I'll feel like I'm taking avantget of you, we'll go at a slowe peacet so u have time to heale." L nodes his head ; but says nothing. ( I think u can come up with the rest, you can use this and change it in the way u want, I came up with this as I was reading u story, I realy like it, hope to read more, I'll BOOKMARKET for now, if u need more ideas gmail me at
    ( ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com )
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