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By : ArcadiaEclipse
  • From Shenanigans on April 27, 2011
    Hey, I just wanted to shoot you a quick email on this story-
    I have, for my whole fanfiction-reading life, hated AU. I never found there to be a reason for it- on account of the fact I grew to like the characters because of the current situation they were in. I didn't care about someone else's version - all I cared about was them staying in their character, in their setting- in the one I was used to.
    Then I found this glorious work of art.
    This has to be the best FF I've ever read in my life - this story was the single thing that inspired me to start writing hetalia fics once again. PLEASE keep adding chapters, I've never been a huge FF follower - i generally stuck to smutty one shots and left it at that, but after reading this, Im checking everyday, hoping for a new chapter.
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  • From monochrome on April 17, 2011
    Mahhhh... The second chapter's just as good as the first! :D Yay, Ivan to the rescue... Always knew he wouldn't let any random creepers abuse Alfred... That's his job, after all! Hehe... I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :3
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  • From Ficfan3484 on April 17, 2011
    Interesting, I'm curious where you're going with this. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zooswho on April 16, 2011
    I shouldn't find poor Alfred being kidnapped and abused sexy. But I do. I love Ivan's possessiveness too. It's just a weakness that I have ^.^ So thanks for writing this and filling my (not so) secret fantasy *evil grin*
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  • From Arukas80085 on April 16, 2011
    Also, I love when you do Russia's broken English. It makes me swoon.
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  • From Arukas80085 on April 16, 2011
    Dear, Arcadia. Please Marry me. Love, Arukas. :3

    No, but seriously, every time you write something it becomes my new favorite, haha. I just love blood play and crazy, possessive Russia! Man... 4some with Latvia and Lithuania would be heavenly (though I don't think it goes along with the story at all, haha). And man... hetero turning gay is always a good plot point. Still confused about the title choice, but I have no doubts about it becoming clear later on.
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  • From wraightsky on April 16, 2011
    Haha... well... Alfred IS America... so, chapter 2 actually seemed in character (to me anyway).

    I can't wait to read more of this!
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  • From VeeVours on April 15, 2011
    this made me so happy
    i love this paring and you grate job
    in writhing this story hope there will be
    more to come!!!!
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  • From monochrome on April 08, 2011
    Ooooh, I'm really liking how this is going! :D Although, I'm having some rather icky flashbacks to Hostel right now... And as much as I love Ivan being a creeper, please don't have him do anything permanently damaging to Alfred D: He's too pretty to mangle. Anywho, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Bethany on April 02, 2011
    I am so excited to see what happens!

    Al- "Honestly I'm not gay"
    Ivan- "I don't care"
    Al- 'Good thing that is all cleared up'

    I was all.... Run for the hills Al! The topic is going to come up suddenly when your guard is down.... Like when you wake up in the morning and he just decides to slid on in your back door and get his hands on Florida. XD

    Thinking about it... I would probably do anything Ivan would want me to do if he just killed everyone I know. Especially being American in enemy territory. Me- "What was that Ivan? Gang bang in 15 minutes? Sounds like a party... heh..." Just keep the whole Las Vegas motto "What happens in Soviet territory stays in Soviet territory."

    Can't wait for more! Guess I will just have to R&R some of your other fics while I wait.... YAY!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on March 19, 2011
    Interesting, I can't wait til you update this.
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