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Reviews for Immortal

By : zoni
  • From ANON - melancholy on February 25, 2015
    I'm literally crying because of this fanfic. This was worse than Lelouch's death. It was excellent, but I did not want to feel this sad! Too much feeling to handle, I'm going to go watch happy anime now.
    /cries
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  • From Fate1011987 on November 06, 2011
    WOW! I'm not usually a fan of Yaoi, but this story was f***ing amazing! Very well written, seriously.
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  • From JLHanley13 on July 26, 2011
    Horrible. I am so sad now for Bassy. I totally didn't see this end coming but I must say that I did love it. I laughed I cried. Amazing writing. Please keep up with it and please more Kuro!

    Thanks so much. This one was a complete joy to read.

    December
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  • From LexieDarr on July 26, 2011
    Yeah...I'll admit it, I cried like a baby at the end. I really thought that you were going to let him pull through it all, I was wrong, oh so wrong. Great writing though and the detail was amazing.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on July 11, 2011
    Oh, I didn't expect the end to be so sad... :'( But it was rather beautiful too.
    Also, couldn't Ciel 'live on' in Sebastian, like Alois and his brother inside Hannah in the second season of Black Butler (the anime)? I thought it would be fitting that Sebastian and Ciel be together forever with their strong feelings for each other...
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  • From ramblingrobin on July 04, 2011
    Oof. That was very well done, but very sad. It feels very true to the story that it ended that way, but I can't help but wish for an alternate happy ending. Very nicely done. I'm going to have to look at pictures of puppies or something before I go to bed now, or I'm going to have sad dreams.

    Robin
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  • From barkere2 on July 04, 2011
    I have to say that I cried so much when i read the last chapter...I mean how sad...great writing. I would hate to loose my Ciel.
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  • From JLHanley13 on July 03, 2011
    I seriously love this story and very much enjoy the way you write. You are so in tune with them it is like watching really good additions to the show! I cant wait for last chapter. Though I wish it wasn't ending I cant wait to see how it does! Thank you for writing!

    December
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  • From ANON - Althydia on June 26, 2011
    Oh no, I don't want Ciel to die! And just when Sebastian was his again too! I loved their reunion and I was glad that Sebastian was finally free of his secondary contract, and now this... I really hope that Ciel will be okay and that Sebastian can help. After all, he should be even more powerful now that he's just eaten, right?
    I just found your story and read all chapters in one go I was so into it. I was really interested in your idea of Ciel being unable to age because Sebastian didn't complete the contract. It must have been a hard and lonely life for Ciel: he probably couldn't show himself for too long in the same place, or start a relationship with anyone because he looked like a kid who never grew up, and not knowing why Sebastian suddenly left too. He must be an adult in a child's body now. I dearly hope you'll continue the story after such an ending to the last chapter... Poor Ciel! And their feelings for each other with Sebastian were so nice to read about too.
    I was also wondering: if Sebastian is hungry when he's with Ciel, can't he drink some of Ciel's blood from time to time to relieve the hunger a little, since his blood is also supposed to have a strong effect on demons (like tasting a bit of his soul for them)? And as a demon I suppose he wouldn't have fingerprints or DNA so it should be easier to hide from the police. Right?
    Plus, will we see some of the old characters that can still be around, like the reapers and the Undertaker (well, technically he's part of the reapers, even though he's retired)? I'd also love to see Sebastian as a butler again, baking cakes for Ciel and helping him in his investigations (since Ciel seems to be still working for the British government), as well as protecting him of course. And I wonder if he's still crazy about cats?
    Your original idea gives you so many plot opportunities, so I'd hate to see the story end too soon with Ciel's death. Please, don't kill him? But Sebastian is of course welcome to take revenge on the people who hurt his young master...
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  • From Luimeril on June 17, 2011
    goodness! wonderful, amazing story. really sucked me into it. :d i got angry when i reached the last updated chapter, as i always do for stories that really draw me into them. i eagerly await the next update! poor Sebas-chan! he finally gets his young Master back, only to possibly lose him in an accident! i do believe heads will roll, should he find who did this. x: keep up the good work!
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  • From r0xbuddi on June 15, 2011
    Alrighty, I'm a little more interested in the story. I'd like to know the exact conditions of how Ceil has been getting along (exact? Maybe I mean more detailed?). If you're able to add double spaces between the pages, it'd make reading this tons easier. Keep it up!
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  • From DemyxsSitarGirl on June 11, 2011
    oh its so beautiful, please continue, its not like the other quick terribly written smutty fics in this section, im going to read your other stories
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  • From ramblingrobin on June 05, 2011
    Oh I can't wait to see more of this. It is so well done.You have done Sebastion very well! I hope you write more soon.
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