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By : Asukalover88
  • From Psychostorm on January 17, 2012
    I thoroughly approve of your bastardization of Evangelion, keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ANON - Mr Unlikable on December 30, 2011
    What's the point? You don't listen to criticism and blow it off when someone expresses some legitimate concerns. That's not how you get people to continue reading. I am not here to kiss your butt and hand out unnecessary praise.

    You have proven that you have no respect for the source material since I explicitly told you that there is a limit as to how many pilots there can be but instead of acknowledging the facts, you merely placed a non canon tag in your summary as if somehow that makes it alright.

    What is the point of adding more female pilots that nobody but you will give a rat's ass about. In case you haven't been paying attention,the newest one Mari is not well received except for hentai and doujins. So what can you do better than Gainax.

    Judging by what you have posted here,you don't have the tools to give them a reasonable explanation as to how they became a pilot,a background and story to showcase their existence isn't just for your own masturbatory needs.

    That is why I have such negative views on your fanfic. I have read and seen better Evangelion lemons on this site that takes into account the charcters' personalites and manages to add a story as well. Evangelion is a very hard fandom to include OCs in.

    Continue to regularly update a lemon that nobody but you cares about since nobody else has reviewed it.



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  • From ANON - Mr Unlikable on December 20, 2011
    So basically you are going to make an all female harem for Misato?! Well that is original I do say. Unfortunately the only other female pilot left is the new one Mari from the Rebuild movies. I take it the VOOC in this case means various original characters. How boring. Evangelion does not need any OCs at all. There are more than enough females in the anime that you shouldn't have to resort to making up your own.

    While this may be your fanfic,you are still posting it on the internet to be judged. Also in case you are not aware there is a strict limit as to how many countries can have an Evangelion and thus pilots. I hate people who don't pay attention to canon and ruin it. Try re watching the series with your pants up okay?
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  • From ANON - Mr Unlikable on December 17, 2011
    I'm sure Gendo will be thrilled that Misato harmed his pet project Rei. /sarcasm There's suspension of disbelief and then there is outright nonsense. Guess which your story falls into. Misato is going to be a very dead woman when he finds out.

    Asuka though totally believable. Misato is way too OOC. Overall this is a forgettable fanfic.
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