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Reviews for A Kiss Can Be Deadly

By : Alyndrya
  • From ANON - Sayasugizo on February 10, 2012
    So there's some repeated stuff that you use alot so I'm abit annoyed with it to be honest. I wish Seras demon came out more often. And this is a long ass party o.O when is the party gonna be over?
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  • From ANON - Sayasugizo on February 06, 2012
    I love chapter 4. please upload he next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - PalmtreeFreak on February 06, 2012
    I love this story! Really I just love how sexy you write Alucard. Also it amuses me how silly Seras is in actually realizing that he really wants her, but hey, if she did then it really wouldn't be much of a story then.

    Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading things from you. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tina_21 on January 28, 2012
    Please please PLEASE hurry an write another chapter, I absolutely LOVE this story and can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - April on January 28, 2012
    I really like the tone of this story and the dierection it is heading so far with the first chapter. It's very different from 'Sending Over The Edge' and I enjoy the two different perspectives of the romance that can happen between Alucard and Seras. One thing I would like to comment on is that sometimes the sentences and even paragraphs can seem repetitive. You may have seras say something like, Alucard is sexy five differnt ways which is fine, but you put it all either in the same line or one sentence after another. That's not to say you did that in this piece it's just an exapmle of what you might so when explaining the characters thoughts, and it can get distracting.
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  • From ANON - Sayasugizo on January 20, 2012
    i loved it! looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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