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Reviews for Communist Bug

By : Sadistic-uke
  • From ANON - TenbinzaAgain on January 18, 2013
    This is Tenbinza again, if you couldn't tell from the name! Tehehehe. I forgot to mention this in the review I left.

    Is this fic some kind of message that America likes to control people in his own way? And it's just hugely hypocritical because he lookes at others like their just big old communists, when in some way he is like that too, but hides behind it and makes it look fairly harmless. Sorry I couldn't but want to mention that as well, and it was my intention to mention it before with the other review.

    Anyways, I don't know if you would want to talk or not, but if you want to I have an account on FF.net and my username is Tenbinza you can send me a pm. Or let me know in some way. I wonder if you can see my email...

    Happy Writing,
    Tenbinza!
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  • From ANON - Tenbinza on January 18, 2013
    I don't think I've ever reviewed a fic from this site before. But I just want to say right out that you should continue this, I don't know how long this has been out. Anyways, yeah I would love to see more of this.

    It is kind of hot, but more of sad really. I mean Alfred is being so delusional with everything from my standpoint. And I just really want Matthew to give him a piece of his mind. That was his first time, and he took it away like it didn't totally matter then acts all hurt when it's obvious that Matthew didn't want it that way. Especially over something that Alfred had no right to protest about. I wouldn't of blamed Matthew to start having a stronger security rim on the border between them. I mean that is just bullshit.

    Alfred didn't even really make it hot for Matthew as well, it was obvious he gave no shits even though he should've. In all honesty it kind of pisses me off, and that is why I am writing. Alfred needs to get his ass kicked. Hard. He really just expects Matthew to stop hanging out with his friends because he's paranoid and is obviously jealous, by raping him and being just beyond a dick? No. In fact I really hope Matthew starts hanging out with them more, and them protecting him from Alfred. Which would surely piss him off, but in the end giving him his just desserts. Because he didn't get his brother to do his bidding like he'd thought he'd get him to.

    I have a feeling though this isn't how the fic is going to work out. It's somehow going to be a continuous stream of abuse and rape, that suddenly(Maybe not, but just saying.) turns into romance by Matthew through all of it suddenly caring about him when Alfred for whatever professes his love. Don't know if that would be exactly how it would turn out, but I wouldn't be too surprised. Unless if this just suppose to be an abuse and rape fic with no real resolve, then hey that's what floats your boat, but doesn't really give much out. Not trying to sound mean or anything, just my perspective and in all reality that doesn't really matter sometimes, if you think it works out best that way then go for it. It's your fic.

    This whole fic is really just being hypocritical, and I mean with Alfred. He talks like Matthew's friends are the problem, when he's the one that ends up becoming the problem. Saying that their controlling Matthew's mind and pushing him towards being a communist, when he is doing exactly with trying to make him not a communist, even though he wasn't that in the first place, while they(Cuba and Russia) aren't. All of this really is, is that America is jealous Cuba and Russia are getting Canada's attention and is trying to hide it by saying he is turning into a communist and gets pushed even further to that belief when to him it seems like Canada would rather go to their defense than his, which in turn makes him pissed off because he's losing his brother/a-would-be-in-his-mind-lover towards people he hates. And instead of just trying to win his affection he is hurting Canada in the process. Or just kind of controlling and converting his feelings along the way, I don't know it's all how you play out the fic.

    I feel kind of bad, because maybe I am just being too much of a captain obvious and I don't really need to point it out. But hey, I can't help it! Especially when I read a fic that moves me. And that is what you did, you moved me. When I review, I tend to like to leave a fairly long review going on and on about something, because it got to me in some way. Which means, if that was your angle, you got exactly what you wanted and did a good job with your fic. So my hat is off to you!

    Fairly good read, I wouldn't mind at all with seeing more of this!

    Happy Writing,
    Tenbinza!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2012
    what happens next?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2012
    I... I want you to continue this. Please! Continue this...
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  • From tamasama on May 18, 2012
    Beyond some technical issues and grammatical mistakes, this was very enjoyable. I'd love to see a follow-up (preferably involving America's gun).
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  • From Mikkow on May 12, 2012
    ♥ I love it. Please do make another chapter. (BUT DONT FORGET ABOUT SNITCH) C:
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