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Reviews for Ghost-Trainer

By : Almister
  • From ANON - BBWulf on June 13, 2014
    Awesome so far. I like it's view on a more 'realistic' pkmn world.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2012
    This story is so awesome! I've written ghost training mediums before, but this is a whole new, amazing aspect! Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From LesaleBloodraven on June 10, 2012
    Why do I like your writing so much? It's surprising. I usually come on this site to read something a little more carnal, but your stories have been a treat, and not mainly because of the sex. This one doesn't even have any yet, so far.

    Things I like about this one in particular, so far:
    * Going into the nature of Ghost Types. I found your interpretation very interesting. If Atticus had gone on for several more paragraphs about it, I probably still would've read it. I don't suggest doing that, though. Other people might skip over it entirely.
    * The title. Double meaning. Nice.
    * The Purist movement. I believe this isn't the first time the idea has come up. There are most likely other stories with a similar concept. I liked how out-of-line they were this time, though. I'd be very curious how it plays out when the movement is large enough to be considered a regional threat and they become extinguished by force.
    * The training. I don't like this nearly as much as the rest of the stuff, but it was a good idea. In game, training means beating Pokemon up until yours level up. It's nice to see something different. Most fics say the Pokemon are training, but leave it up to the reader to guess.
    * Poe. Dark Type trainer. I like Dark Types. I like the colors black and red. I'm also slightly obsessed with ravens and blood. Enough said.

    The only bad thing I have to say about the fic are the grammar issues here and there. No big deal. Most of them, you use a homonym in place of the word that would actually fit. It's no big deal, like I said. I look forward to more of your work.
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