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Reviews for Legendary Rivalry Pokémon

By : sainmoth14
  • From ANON - Shadow Slayer on August 04, 2014
    Not a bad story but a bit unbelievable when Ash passes out.. maybe something more along the lines of they fight and Ash tries to stop them and accidently gets shoved away, falling and smacking his head and then slips under the water might have worked better. But I'd like to read more anyhow.
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