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Reviews for The Scorpion

By : Bastetkitten
  • From ANON - Rambling Robin on January 20, 2013
    I loved this. It was heart-wrenching, but wonderful. I'm very glad Haruhi and Kyoya ended up together. I stayed up way too late just so I could finish it. I will be looking for more stories from you with more sex. I loved the lost chapter and wished there was more. Very nice job.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on September 25, 2012
    I love this story so much!! I just started reading it today and got so sucked in, I read the whole thing in one sitting. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please give us yummy Kyoya/Haruhi scenes soon ^_____^
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  • From sparrowswing on September 23, 2012
    [insert high-pitched fangirl scream here]

    That was such a fantastic ending. I'm still a little sad with the lack of resolution in the whole Honey/Mori situation, but at least there's a bit of hope. And I freaking love Haruhi being a little sex kitten. I can totally see her being demure one moment and a vixen the next, given the right motivation. And what better motivation than Kyoya? Yeah, I frakking love this story.
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on September 21, 2012
    I love this story! I can't wait for the next update! Good luck on your tests.
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on September 15, 2012
    Another good chapter! I'm so glad tamaki has finally found out about Kyoya and Haruhi!!! Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting patiently for your next update
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  • From sparrowswing on September 13, 2012
    Huh, just noticed some weirdness at the beginning of my last review. My tablet hates how much I type and has this annoying tendency to randomly move the cursor. I usually catch it, but obviously I didn't that time. I'll try to keep a closer eye on it.

    I love seeing Kyoya's brother being just as observant and intuitive as Kyoya. And the little glimpses into Kyoya's childhood are great. I'm kind of surprised Tamaki didn't burst into the room and yell at Kyoya, but I'm glad he didn't. I'm sure once he thinks about it, he'll realize that his friends' happiness is more important.
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on September 10, 2012
    Sooooo gooood!!! This is by far my fav fanfic for ohhs! Very well written. I can't wait for the next update =)
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  • From sparrowswing on September 10, 2012
    niteSa theen imagine what that depression much be like. My brother OD'ed on E a little over a decade ago and *still* talks about how awful the depression was afterward. He wasn't really suicidal, but he would not have cared enough to save his own life if he were dying, and he often talked about how he wished the whole world would just burn to a cinder. And LSD seems to just royally fuck with people, so to combine the two, take too much, almost die, and then suffer through coming down... It would be completely miserable. It's a good thing the group is back together and seems intent on making things work - Honey and Mori notwithstanding - because Kyoya would definitely need that support system.

    *Squee*! Haruhi's holding his hand, and Tamaki knows but didn't completely freak out (yet). Progress! On a side note, I'm kind of up in the air about what I'd like to see happen with Honey and Mori. I love them together, and I hate seeing them fight like this, but I'm totally on Mori's side in all this. And Honey was just totally out of line after everything that happened. He's just being so selfish and narrow-minded! At this point I'd almost rather see Mori end up with Hikaru, and that's a pairing I've never even considered before.
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  • From sparrowswing on September 08, 2012
    Gah, I'm sorry I didn't get my review in before you posted a new chapter! That last chapter was just so intense, I felt like I needed a cooling-off period before I could post more than 'gahomgwtfbbq!!?' And while that is my favorite pairing, and I'm insanely happy that you're planning a Lost Chapter, that is soooo not how I imagined/hoped things would go. But it was great in the same way this whole story is great, with the twists and drama and... See, even now I can't form a coherent review! This is fabulous, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on September 05, 2012
    Oh no!! How could Hikaru leave them alone?!? Such a good chapter! Don't leave us hanging too long! =)
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  • From sparrowswing on September 05, 2012
    I just keep coming back to this story. At first it was just curiosity over the pairing and a love for Kyoya, but this story sticks with me. It's like the soap operas my mom used to watch, how you never knew what was going to happen next, and the interpersonal relationships between the characters were constantly in flux, and you just had to keep watching to see what new twist would come to light. I'm a slash fan, and I'll always be a slash fan (I'm a Mori/Kyoya fangirl, and that just doesn't ,happen much), but here I'm almost desperate to see Haruhi and Kyoya hook up. And that last chapter? Ooh, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens, though with my luck they'll just be asleep when he gets back.
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on September 02, 2012
    Such a good chapter!! Poor Mori! I can't wait for Kyoya to start opening up to haruhi
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on August 31, 2012
    Wow! What a great chapter! So full of energy! Can't wait for the next one!!!
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  • From ANON - ivorymoon on August 29, 2012
    Wonderful update as usual. I really love this story and I can't wait to see how you get Kyoya and Haruhi together ^_^! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sp346 on August 28, 2012
    You have me so hooked to this story that I keep checking to see if you updated all day long. The few scenes between Haruhi and Kyoya are very endearing. I think the fact that there are so few of them makes it more special in this story.
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