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Reviews for Avatar: Arceus and the Jewel of Life

By : ArceusAlpha493
  • From Steelrush on October 02, 2012
    Chapter 4 review:

    Arceus keeps meeting life & death situations all the time in these stories. Poor guy...

    Right on Misty! Smash Paul with your mallet!

    Sheesh, Arceus sure has gone through some heavy stuff. I feel bad for him...

    So this is where Link proposed to Cynthia! And...that was one hell of a lemon scene. o_0

    Good chapter, but um...where are the Avatar characters?

    Eh, well, update when possible-
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  • From Steelrush on September 30, 2012
    Chapter 3 review:

    I felt bad for Aang, being reminded of that atrocity which took the lives of his people. Although it was good to see Gyatso's revival.

    Azula certainly did a number on Arceus, that's for sure. o_o

    I was hoping that somebody would take her down, but that did not occur...yet. I thought Arceus was going to definitely die in this chapter, however, I was mistaken.

    Who's going to stop Azula now, I wonder?

    Update when possible-


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  • From Steelrush on September 28, 2012
    Chapter 2 review:

    Damn! Just how many rapists are there in these stories? o_0

    Looks like Ozai did more damage than I initially thought, that guy is an evil ****er, yes indeed.

    Oh great, that demon sister of Zuko's escaped from where she belongs! Let's hope Ozai doesn't get out as well.

    This chapter was decent, although it would have been a little better if there was more action to it.

    Update when you have the time-
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  • From Steelrush on September 13, 2012
    Chapter 1 review:

    Ah, the reminder of Ozai getting his ass kicked by Aang and being punished for his asinine actions, feels good.
    :)

    It's a shame that Aang was still depressed, and when Katara came in and he started...

    o_o

    That was a little...odd, especially when Arceus came in and did it with her.

    I didn't really expect for Arceus to have a female human be another of his mates...that feels weird to me.

    It's good that the Airbending tribe was resurrected, and I'd like to see what's next in this story.

    Update when possible-


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