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Reviews for Strange Bedfellows

By : stellabomb
  • From ANON - Wheatherman on March 18, 2013
    I have to say......I really enjoyed this story....but I just could not care about the last couple of chapters once you revealed what couple it was going to end with....I don't care about Sting....and I have a hard time thinking anybody cares about him for more then his looks....because besides that.....he's really quite pathetic....also...you're summary is a lie.....it's not equal parts. This thing was Lucy/Sting from begining to end whith just tiny teasings of NaLu....
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  • From alwayskougacola on February 25, 2013
    So much loves!Sting needs love too, please continue... and the steamy scenes are fabulous!
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  • From xMoni on January 24, 2013
    Your story is really really great, seeing as the people stay very in character even though you put them into such a mature situation! :) Plus I think the plot's super creative and your style is nice to read.
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  • From ANON - Ksrjah on December 21, 2012
    This is phenomenal, I'm not even exaggerating. I really like the how NatsuXLucyXSting angle because there are so much LisannaXNatsuXLucy out there and so little of this even though they're equally not canon love triangles. I really do hope you update soon! I love this fic (and the smut). It's addicting!
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  • From Kanookie on November 23, 2012
    I've gotta say. This story plot is really good and the idea has great substance. I enjoy reading it.

    That being said, I think the execution could use some work. A lot of the facts are twisted or incorrect, and the conflicts between characters are petty and resolved by unrelated problems. This fight between Lucy and Sting was about him inviting her to work with him and then doing all the work himself, right? What does any of that have to do with Lucy doing everything herself? Added to that, at the point in time where Sting is introduced, Lucy can summon 2 spirits at once for a prolonged amount of time. Having her at her limit when only calling out 2 separately is unrealistic.

    I don't mean to say that the story is full of fallacies or anything. Just a few mistakes that make it a little confusing.
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  • From ANON - Micca on November 19, 2012
    Hi again,
    Uhlala Natsu made his move, yay boy! But you made Sting really likeable for me so Im still torn between them (maybe exactly like Lucy?) With a story good as this you can afford it, to make people wait. (but please, please not to long its torture otherwise) :)
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  • From ANON - Micca on October 30, 2012
    Hi
    I have lots of compliments for you ;)
    1) Its great that you update every week
    2) Your story plot is thrilling and the charakters are reasonable
    3) I like your writing style
    Although Im a big NaLu fan, I felt sorry for Sting in the latest chapter. I hope you do not solve the triangle too quickly, I like the tension between them. In the future I would love the see another lemon scene (pretty please? ^^) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2012
    Great story, great lemon scene! Im curious what Nastu will do if he finds out why Lucy smells different... Are you going to add something (for example the fight between Natsu and and Sting) from the actual manga? Then Sting will get wounded and Lucy rushes to his side and Natsu wont understand the world anymore hehe... Anyway please update, *cough* everday cough*, soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2012
    Wow I´m glad I switched for the lemon version to AFF! You did a really good job with this chapter and finally a couple who use condoms... Please update soon, I can´t wait to read what happens next!
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  • From Ro on October 10, 2012
    Awesome story! Updste ! And I would really like that Lucy is not only used as a sex tool! XD Sting should harbour some feelings for her ta! XD
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