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Reviews for Darling, It Was Good

By : freefalldino
  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2013
    I usually just lurk on this site, but seeing as you're requesting for reviews, and you don't have many so far...

    Your writing is pretty solid, all things considered. Minimal grammar mistakes, and even fewer spelling mistakes. That really helps keep readers paying attention. Either you proofread your stories, or someone else does the same; either way, I for one appreciate that. :)

    Since you said you're open to pairing requests, I'll throw in my favorite crack pairing: YuexSakura. No, I don't know why I like this. I just do. Or YukitoxSakura. That one's even harder to find. While SyaoranxSakura is cute, it's done so often I'm kinda bored with it. So something new would not go amiss I think.

    Anyway, hope this helps. Keep up the good work!
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  • From PnKnG on June 14, 2013
    Pretty interesting stories so far, I like it. And in general your writing seems very good and capable.

    Here is a bit of an odd request I have:
    Sakura and Syaoran still have a long distance relationship going since he still can't move back to tomoeda.
    After some suggestions and sweet talk from tomoyo sakura let herself get talked into a rather naughty and unusual surprise for her sweetheart.
    She invites one of their male friends (could be eriol or takashi or someone else) and while tomoyo files it syaoran gets to see his girlfriend with a friend of his and finds himself surprisingly turned on by it.
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