Reviews for Seal of DarknessBy : RaphaelTMNT |
I can't take this anymore, nothing pisses me off more than NTR, dude if you are going to put that shit in your fick atleast have the decency to fucking flag it dammit! This shit with Akasha and Issa had better fucking resolve it self soon or you are seriously going to lose a reader!
This is a very good story, great interactions and everything! This story gave me some commish ideas, yum, yum! Thinking dirty thoughts lol. Love the Akasha and Batman moments and can't wait to see their relationship progress.
Great chap Akasha is perfect for Batman, she accepts Bruce and Batman. They could actually work as a pairing the dangers of his life and darkness that comes with it, she could handle and except. Plus he really wouldn't have to worry about his enemies harming her, Akasha is a powerful shinso. But Morrigan's got her eyes set on Batman as well, boy I bet the two of them will end up butting heads, Akasha probably wouldn't want to share either.
I saw the crossover and was like meh, could work, but probably not. Looked over the reviews and decided it might be worth checking out, so I did. And man this is really, really good! I was especially hooked after chapter five or six and it really got epic following the showdown between Akasha and Batman which was like chap seven or eight! I love how she tasted his blood after defeating him, no way could Batman defeat someone with the strength and abilities of Akasha unless he had time for preperation.
I love how she retained Omote's memories and I can see why she was crushing on Tsukune, too bad Moka walked in on them, now things are awkward between them all lol. But I specifically love her interactions with Bruce. They honestly make a great pair, Akasha can handle his dark side unlike some of his past lovers. And with Morrigan in the mix things could get really sticky:) The story plot is awesome and look forward to finding out more about this hidden gateway. Let's hope if Morrigan sleeps with Batman she doesn't steal his soul like she's been doing her other partners. Genius work, glad I took the time to read this awesome story. I wait eagerly for an update.
This is awesome work!
Seriously! Why is this story not getting more reviews?! THIS IS SUPERB WORK!
Please continue writing and don't abandon this story!
It is too good!
Oh my God!
I deeply apologize for leaving this review so late!
I am finally caught up with this story and it is proving to be a truly magnificent work of art!
Akasha's seductive reveal was done PERFECTLY! I could truly see the entire scene unfold verbatum.
Looking forward to the next update and how Bruce will handle not only Akasha but Morrigan as well.
Excellent Job!
I just spent the last hour reading this story and I am SOOOO glad that I have found it!
This is excellent work and I look forward to the next update!
Great job!
Very interesting story, please continue.
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