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Reviews for Not Everything is What it seems

By : LoveKittie
  • From ANON - X23 on October 25, 2006
    Not bad at all. My only real complaint is you suffer from the same problem I used to have... You end the chapter too soon. You sould draw things out more, add on more, etc. The writing is good, but it's overly short when, if you had more in each chapter, it would be really good.

    Plus, come on, Minako/Kunzite. Much love.
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  • From ANON - JBYSGOG212 on October 20, 2003
    hey look i really iked the story and all but ive been waiting 4 a long time 4 u 2 finish with your chapter issue or whatever and its really getting on my nerves i want to read it but u havent put anything up yet and im getting really PISSED!


    Thanx 4 your time
    LUV,
    Sarah
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  • From on September 26, 2003
    I was attracted by the summary, since your fic seems to be the *only* senshi/shitennou fic around here. I hope you will put the rest up soon. Judging from the reviews, this is a nice story. I am looking forward to the coming chapters and be the judge myself.
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  • From ANON - Ami on August 08, 2003
    Hi, I really liked the first chapter of your story and hope that you continue writting on it. One thing on the disclaimer that you have is Sera Munn, its Sailor Moon.

    LOOOVVVEE your story, please continue

    QueenofMercury

    www.fanfiction.net
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  • From ANON - Mizaki on July 30, 2003
    Don't mean to flame too much, but that was quite possibly one of the worst fics I've ever read. Grammar, punctuation, the whole like was pretty much horrible. Not to mention some anatomically incorrect aspects as well. >_>;; Kid, take it slow and check everything over. Don't write everything as practically one long paragraph.
    Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - JM on July 15, 2003
    Continue please
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  • From ANON - cuttie_blossom on July 09, 2003
    FINALLY!! a gen/senshi fic u can't find that around here alot welp great fic continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - yue on July 08, 2003
    dang that was harsh. i hope u have someone kill thuckiucking brd!!rd!! it'll be cool when she gets to run away with pirates.
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