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Reviews for Once Upon a Moon

By : Michmoon
  • From IlDolceSuono on November 04, 2009
    There are only a few spelling errors that take away from this overall, very impressive writing. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    There are a few mistakes that I honestly don't give a rats rear end about in the spelling department. Dear God, please continue, it's so nice to see well writting Shitennou/Senshi.
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  • From ANON - Cassy on December 30, 2004
    This is an amazing story. You should continue writing about the other couples.
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  • From ANON - AnimeLuva1 on June 17, 2004
    OMG ur gonna update right?! this story is Awsome! PLEEEEZ UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Queen Of Fluff on June 15, 2004
    great job on the story. i hope that wasnt all! i wanna noe what happend to sere + endy. i hope u continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Carolin Rocha on March 25, 2004
    That was great. Jadeite/Raye, Lita/Nephlite, Amy/Zoisite, Mina/Malachite, and Serenity/Endymion were great and cute couples in the story. I want to read more chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - deztnie on March 18, 2004
    hi!

    just wanna say that i'm glad finally someone shares my passion for Rei-Jedite romance! I loove your fanfic and the lovemaking was beautiful and perfect, like what i've always imagined. I hope you'll continue with the other seishis.

    best wishez ;p
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  • From ANON - Stace on January 18, 2004
    Very good, but what happens to Serenity???
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  • From ANON - me on January 01, 2004
    I wholly support your noble cause of getting Rei and Jadeite in bed together! Because, um, yes.

    Anyways. Good job! The writing is clean and easy to read; there are some minor technical errors and a few strange word choices, but maybe that's just me. I think there is a real strength in the way you portray the maturity (and not sexually, but that also) of the characters instead of them being stupidly innocent. Rei is going after what she wants instead of waffling and, hey, I can appreciate that. Yes, and on the subject of Rei and Jadeite, I really, really, really like what you've done with them. You don't turn Rei into a shrieking, bitchy harpy and you don't fall back on the natural conventions placed on Jadeite's character in fanfiction (prankster). I mean, I can see elements of Rei's temper and Jade's funlovingness' (is that a word?) but they aren't caricatures, so kudos! Now this has gone on way too long, so I shall stop. Hope to see more in the future. :)
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  • From ANON - Denial on December 03, 2003
    This is a great story. You are doing a wonderful job writing this story and keeping all the characters in character.
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  • From ANON - ArrA on October 26, 2003
    I really liked it! Rei/Jeadite is definitely one of my favourite Sailor Moon ships!

    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - eternalsilverfox on July 27, 2003
    nicely written. hardly any grammatical mistakes... please update soon!!! i want to read more...
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  • From ANON - diablo on July 24, 2003
    he is beeing such a baka. he sould go to her. so so wut if he getsw her mad u think he would b able to protect himself. keep writing. i really want to no if he gos or not. ja ne

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