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By : Cornflower
  • From ANON - Weisslover27 on June 27, 2005
    Excellant. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Apollo on April 10, 2005
    Heyas! I was going through the archives backwards and stumbled upon this! I read it on another website a while ago and enjoyed it all over!

    I don't know if you still post here or even check reviews, but you may want to look into reposting as when the website when down it sorta garbled your story slightly in some places. Not that it is unreadable, but some of the words went slightly odd.

    But again, really enjoyed the story!

    Apollo
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  • From ANON - kitsune-oni on January 30, 2004
    EEk!
    That was so cute!
    I loved the whole thing where Aya thinks he's dead. Well, he is in a way. But the whole place for his sister in the world thing.
    I like it.
    XD
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  • From JenHayes on August 06, 2003
    This story was really fabulous! And the line Youji says gave me chills. ("If you come to my bed, Aya... I wont let you go, do you understand that?" His eyes searched Aya's, locked him in his gaze. "If you come with me tonight, that's where you'll stay -- with me!") Theichanchanges are really great, and you captured Aya extremely well! Good job!

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