rate_review Reviews

I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.

An excellent story, once you get past all the spelling and grammatical errors. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Wow! I really like the story and I hope that you will continue on it in some way!!! Awesome!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I loved it

O.O

Ummm...the story was great and all, no misspellings that I noticed, or grammatical errors, but does Mamoru-sama ever find out that Usagi-sama was raped? Does Artemis find out that Luna was raped as well? that kinda left me wanting more. Other than that, nice story!

*Low whistle* Well, if that was me, I\'d be more excited about the cat ears and tale than she was. Neko Princess Lemon! Hehehehehe. I loved that fic and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

Princess Lemon -*-

Okay, so, Usagi was brutally raped, and yet, just a few hours afterward, she\'s perfectly fine, no signs of trauma, no emotional pain, etc.? She just acts like it never happened? I\'m sorry, I can\'t buy that. Being raped is an intensely painful (physically and emotionally) and degrading experience. There\'s no one out there that would be totally unaffected by it, as Usagi seems to be in this story.

When I saw \"To be continued\" at the end of the first chapter, I assumed you\'d be dealing with the consequences of what happened to Usagi. Otherwise, what\'s the point of writing the story?