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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say this fic has an odd effect in me. I don\'t like yaoi but I choose read this because of you. I love your stories. And I must confess it\'s disturbing. Not because the male/male relationship but the psicological web.
I see Battousai as a strong man who brings a cold breath upon his heart to follow what he thinks is his duty. But in your fic we can see a young man, lost in the madness, torn between kill and guilt. A man who knows he deserve punishment for bloodshed and seeks for it leting Saito torture and humiliation consume him. It\'s so sad!!!
It\'s strange how Kenshin let all that happen concious about the wrongness of the act. We can see it when he cries, altough his body reaction. The mix of pain and pleasure is so depressive.now now about pelople who likes the combination, but Kenshin\'s suffering is so clear. The way he thinks about Tomoe and the lack ok will to be envolve with a male lover (even Katsura, who is gentle) proves he\'s not gay. Kenshin just puts himself in the trap of what he considers disgusting just to be punished and feel some relieve at the same time.
I can\'t say that I like to see my beloved caracter in such depressing path, because I\'m used to know him as a man so strong and indeniable masculine. The idea of Kenshin so fragile and in so much pain is an alien, but I can\'t say that I don\'t like the story. It\'s just different and disturbing, but is fantastic.
Well, I\'m sorry my english is horrible but I did have to say these words.
Hugs from Brazil
I see Battousai as a strong man who brings a cold breath upon his heart to follow what he thinks is his duty. But in your fic we can see a young man, lost in the madness, torn between kill and guilt. A man who knows he deserve punishment for bloodshed and seeks for it leting Saito torture and humiliation consume him. It\'s so sad!!!
It\'s strange how Kenshin let all that happen concious about the wrongness of the act. We can see it when he cries, altough his body reaction. The mix of pain and pleasure is so depressive.now now about pelople who likes the combination, but Kenshin\'s suffering is so clear. The way he thinks about Tomoe and the lack ok will to be envolve with a male lover (even Katsura, who is gentle) proves he\'s not gay. Kenshin just puts himself in the trap of what he considers disgusting just to be punished and feel some relieve at the same time.
I can\'t say that I like to see my beloved caracter in such depressing path, because I\'m used to know him as a man so strong and indeniable masculine. The idea of Kenshin so fragile and in so much pain is an alien, but I can\'t say that I don\'t like the story. It\'s just different and disturbing, but is fantastic.
Well, I\'m sorry my english is horrible but I did have to say these words.
Hugs from Brazil
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is wow. just wow. that was wow. that was interestingly wow. keep writing. hurry up and update soon. WOW newayz. yea wow. just hurry and update. WOW! ja ne.
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Never mind. This was much, MUCH better than Kenshin getting back at Saitou.
(animuffin shudders with a sudden chill)
Kami-sama, this was creepy...
@Jen@
(animuffin shudders with a sudden chill)
Kami-sama, this was creepy...
@Jen@
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(squeal)
Oh, wait! I just read the other reviews, and someone (I already forgot your name--sorry, it\'s 2:46 AM here!) suggested that Saitou leave Ken-chan all tied up for the Ishinshishi to find...
What if Kenshin goes back and is confronted by Katsura, who sees the blood and bruises and TOTALLY freaks out?!
\"What the hell are you doing to yourself, Kenshin?\"
O\' course, that could be a lead-in to another lovely lemon with Kenshin and Katsura-san... I know, I\'m shameless! :D
But oh, the angst if the above wish does come true... because Katsura would see even MORE bruises and blood after stripping the hitokiri, and would worry that Kenshin\'s abuser tore him inside as well, so we might have a bit of apprehenshion about banging him...
(sigh)
I\'m so sick, I scare myself. I guess I just want a little comfort for the poor boy. Amid the lemon trees, of course.
Or... while I\'m on a roll here... what if Sano and Kenshin are banging, years later, and poor Kenshin has a flashback and goes all \"Don\'t hurt me, don\'t hurt me, I really didn\'t want it...\", thereby completely freaking Sanosuke out, and voila, we have a hurt/comfort scene!
...did I mention I\'m shameless? ;D
(Kenshin falls over, spinny-eyed and bloody-nosed)
Eheh...sorry.
@Jen@
Oh, wait! I just read the other reviews, and someone (I already forgot your name--sorry, it\'s 2:46 AM here!) suggested that Saitou leave Ken-chan all tied up for the Ishinshishi to find...
What if Kenshin goes back and is confronted by Katsura, who sees the blood and bruises and TOTALLY freaks out?!
\"What the hell are you doing to yourself, Kenshin?\"
O\' course, that could be a lead-in to another lovely lemon with Kenshin and Katsura-san... I know, I\'m shameless! :D
But oh, the angst if the above wish does come true... because Katsura would see even MORE bruises and blood after stripping the hitokiri, and would worry that Kenshin\'s abuser tore him inside as well, so we might have a bit of apprehenshion about banging him...
(sigh)
I\'m so sick, I scare myself. I guess I just want a little comfort for the poor boy. Amid the lemon trees, of course.
Or... while I\'m on a roll here... what if Sano and Kenshin are banging, years later, and poor Kenshin has a flashback and goes all \"Don\'t hurt me, don\'t hurt me, I really didn\'t want it...\", thereby completely freaking Sanosuke out, and voila, we have a hurt/comfort scene!
...did I mention I\'m shameless? ;D
(Kenshin falls over, spinny-eyed and bloody-nosed)
Eheh...sorry.
@Jen@
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Great chapter! Another master piece, but *snort* the mushy stuff at the end...*puke* you outdid yourself this time, although I would have loved to cut the Battousai...^____^ my sick and sadistic mind at work! So is that the end, or do you have more in store for my twisted mind? Don\'t take too much offense over my retort over the mushy stuff, it was well done, and very twisted. I love how you threw Tokio back in Saitoh\'s face! ^___________^
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is 0_o WOW o_0. This is my all time favorite fic. ;) It was well written, orginal, and hell, I enjoy yaoi lemons above all else, so there! I don\'t know if your planning anymore to this story. If you are, I know they will be good. If not, I hope you have another story planned use use I think you are a great fanfic writer.
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhlikeliked chapter 5. Well, actually I liked it all! I really hope that you plan on writing more for this story...I just love it so much!
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(evil, sadistic g
I think I will drop dead with spinny-eyes if you have Kenshin tie Saitou up, screw him senseless (yeah, Ken-san as seme, yeah baby!), and then leave him there for his fellow Shinsengumi to find.
Hee hee hee.
But I am evil.
@Jen@
I think I will drop dead with spinny-eyes if you have Kenshin tie Saitou up, screw him senseless (yeah, Ken-san as seme, yeah baby!), and then leave him there for his fellow Shinsengumi to find.
Hee hee hee.
But I am evil.
@Jen@
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I think I like Jenna\'s idea! Only...I would hav go go the opposite way...Saito leave Kenshin for the Ishin Shishi (or even the Shinsengumi!) to find! Wouldn\'t that be fun!
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September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This has got to be my favorite fiction ever! It has my two very favorite pairings, and is full of dark angsty lovin\'! I hope that you plan on writing 50 more chapters! I could never get enough of this...*sighs dreamily with glazed eyes*... I really liked how you put Katsura and Kenshin together! I have only been able to find one fic with that pairing, until now, and I just love it! Now the only pairing missing is (everyone in the Ishin Shishi)/Kenshin...j/k! haha, just kidding! Although...that would be interesting and fun...*blinks*...right...Anyways! Please update as soon as you can! I love this story!