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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was sweet! I don't see many problems with it. You should have continued it to the part where Jyou runs out in a rush to meet Yamato.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My gf and I were happy to see a half-decent YamaxJyou lying around. ^___^ You've got a good talent with this. It flowed easily, and it didn't seemed as force as the couple seems to be sometimes. Good job
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Just simply loved it. Makes me want to actally take the time to work on my fics.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so very, very good... and you claim it\'s your first, eh? I\'m very, very impressed ^^ Love the Yama/Jyou pairing!
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was always one of my favorites on the old fanfiction.net I\'m really glad to see it back! Great writing and a hell of a lot more interesting then most of the two bit crap flooding the fic waves of late. You go. (Mmm Jyou and Yamato!)
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That a new pairing. Me likes write more please!!
*grins maddly*
*grins maddly*