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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Hot Sex!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, but it's one giant paragraph.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely awsome fic. The way you paired them was not oc at all which is hard with Hakkai and sonzo plus that was some of the best lemon that i have ever read. At first the lack of paragraphs buged me mut by the end it kind of made the fic more enjoyable, giving the reader a fealing of anxiousness. over all two thumbs up!
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Simply wow. Very good. I enjoyed it muchly. And the quality? Superb ^_^ Only maybe you need to fix the formatpofryour story. It's hard to read as it is now. Cheers~
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice story, but the layout makes it difficult to read, you may want to concider indenting paragraphs and such
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m not sure if you\'re aware, but there is NO formatting in your story. It\'s all one big block of words. I\'m not going to try and wade through it, but since I do WANT to read it, I\'ll check back periodically to see if it\'s gotten any better. Here\'s hoping you find the problem, so I can read what I\'m sure is a wonderful story.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was completely beautiful. That\'s all that I can say about it, but yet it doesn\'t quite say what the story is. It\'s just simply amazing!
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAH! That was so nice! ^___^ Great job with the plot, it\'s very touching... really! ^___^
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written. I was awed at how well you portrayed the characters. I am quite pleased that I was able to read something as wonderfully done as this. The emotions expressed by the characters was well voiced, and every choice of words was tactful as well. Props on such an excellent lemon. I hope to see more of this great writing.
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a great PWP...Both were so in character! You did a great job of capturing Sanzo\'s sullenness/depression.... Hakkai was great as well....Please write more featureing these two... What fun!