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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Huh... Didn't think I'd like a pairing of Bit and Leena. Lmfao no offense I just REALLY hate Leena. She's annoying and stupid as heck to me. Bit's fine and I actually like Harry. XD But, for the purposes of this story, it was surprisingly good. Nice job!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was an awsome story and I hope you continue with it. I loved the series as a kid, and now that I am older
I love the stories that people write.
I love the stories that people write.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good. A bit of OOC, but still good. Good call on the new armor, but it could have had a better name. But still good job, hope ya write some more Bit and Leena fics ^.^
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao so funny yet so wrong great story man....well....first chapter anyway XD!!!!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GGGr check your spelling man its pissing me off seriously lol.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH lovey dovey bull shit NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! man i didnt know u were gonna right it like that im disapointed i though it was gonna be more romantic :( still very funny though u keep the mood happy even after the incedent u have great plot but your spelling WTF! an i will keep reading....
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u got it man awsome story still feeling a bit of OOC but ill get over it..oh...yea...ill buy u a new keyboard for christmas ;)
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... This is the first story I've found good enough to review... and it's a Bit/Leena - that's pretty rare! Great story - just one question - is Bit's room sound-proofed or are the others just plain deaf? LOL It's just the first thought that came to my mind.... (man, I love ellipsis marks - and hyphens - ya think?! LOL)
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the few stories that I come back to this site to read. The only problem I have is the fact that not everything is showing (When Harry Rapes Leena, I can't see it. It could be a screwup on my end, but it could also be something on the site or in the story), and some of the words go screwy as well (Again, might not be your fault). Other than that, I absolutely adore this story.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man.....*claps* very nice indeed. anger, pain, suffering morphing so well into trust and love. WELL DONE!!!