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for Shattered Star

by Dream Dre

person Odie
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS! I was hooked from the first line, olease continuee!
person SnakesRaiden
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. I\'m not so much into twincest m\'self, but this a good story. I only have two complaints, tho \' - even though the story flowed well without any distractions like bad grammar, there were a few places in the story that could\'ve been better with a *little* bit more description, but it was nothing too major...my second complaint - it\'s a small one :D - is that, since the fic obviously takes place after the series, I\'d jus\' wanna know how it is that Nick\'s alive and well, and threatening t\' kick some major incestual psychopathic ass. I, meself, tend to gloss over episode 23 with little effort, but I jus\' wasn\'t sure if that was the case here...

Anyway, all bitching aside, it\'s a good fic and really has some potentional. Be sure to finish it, ok? Poor lil\' Vashy needs some Nick-luvin\' if he\'s ever gonna be able to go on after the last part of chapter one ; \'C \'Cause the good Lord knows how well Wolfwood administered luvin\' can fix jus\' about ANY problem XD
person Kimbo
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like where this is going. Please more! Pretty please?
*adores angst! and smut* Winning combination.
person katarica
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eek! poor Vash! ....*Eyes dart* keep writing or else.
:)
person Mija
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh poor Vash...sniffles...how could Knives do that?? but then again he did try to kill Vash and all, but why is Vash allowing his brother to do this to him?? huring him and now raping him?? grrrrrrrrrr bad Knives...whats going to happen next?? what will Nick do?? will Vash try to escape?? oooh must know..please update soon pretty please?? and if its not too much trouble would ya email me when you put up the next chap?? if ya cant soo k and will check back..again great story I luv it..update soon k??? ty ty ty Mija..:)
person Dark Ash
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^^. Awww... Poor Vash-san. It\'s so pretty....

I wanna know what happens next! Will Vash stay with Knives, or will he move on Wolfwood?

*is so happy someone on aff.net likes K/V*

Please update soon! *gives a can of coca cola*

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