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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!! NEED MORE NOW >_<
o_o Ergh. I love how Farf's getting some...I want Schu to have a big role in this XD XD...ah, Schwartz, theyre all so yummy....EEK! Post more immediately!
o_o Ergh. I love how Farf's getting some...I want Schu to have a big role in this XD XD...ah, Schwartz, theyre all so yummy....EEK! Post more immediately!
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice fic...
the pace is a bit too fast though. i think you could draw out the scenes and add more description and create a much more effective and striking effect. at the moment everythings a bit rushed and distant...
it\'d be cool to have some more emotions in the story too. you describe very horrific scenes but we dont get the characters emotions behind em and so they dont hit the reader half as much as they could.
i like the idea, its very... sad and painful... and they all seem so mean...
do continue, and please email when you update if that doesnt bother you too much :)
the pace is a bit too fast though. i think you could draw out the scenes and add more description and create a much more effective and striking effect. at the moment everythings a bit rushed and distant...
it\'d be cool to have some more emotions in the story too. you describe very horrific scenes but we dont get the characters emotions behind em and so they dont hit the reader half as much as they could.
i like the idea, its very... sad and painful... and they all seem so mean...
do continue, and please email when you update if that doesnt bother you too much :)
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October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEE!!! This just keep getting better and better!!! LOL
I was reading the new chapter, and I was like thinking about so many thing that I want to say to you along the way...then I read the last part, the part when Farfello pouring orange juice into his cereal.
Magami! I was laughing so hard I forget everything I wanted to say about the other parts of the story, I didn\'t see that coming at all, the humor catch me by such a big suprise! You just keep getting better!
I love your style, very enjoyable, you\'re fanfastic!
I will talk more but I\'m laughing too hard and this is getting long. Please update soon. I can\'t wait to see Omi!
^^
Aya-chan
another +++++ vote.
I was reading the new chapter, and I was like thinking about so many thing that I want to say to you along the way...then I read the last part, the part when Farfello pouring orange juice into his cereal.
Magami! I was laughing so hard I forget everything I wanted to say about the other parts of the story, I didn\'t see that coming at all, the humor catch me by such a big suprise! You just keep getting better!
I love your style, very enjoyable, you\'re fanfastic!
I will talk more but I\'m laughing too hard and this is getting long. Please update soon. I can\'t wait to see Omi!
^^
Aya-chan
another +++++ vote.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update another great chapter! this is so wonderful. It\'s nice to see the work of a cool writer like you. I love the idea of Farfello falling in love (or sex...whatever more accurate). It is, like you day, fun. ^__^ You have such an amazing brain! I can\'t wait to see how the story develop! I love this sotry so much!
Keep up the great work, your writing is definately a page turner. I can\'t wait to see the next chapter up.
Aya-chan
I gave it another +++++ rating.
Keep up the great work, your writing is definately a page turner. I can\'t wait to see the next chapter up.
Aya-chan
I gave it another +++++ rating.
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! You updated!!!
NOOOO!!!!!!! Not my dear Omi...
;_______________;___;
Omi!!! Nagi!!!!!
I love your update! I gave it another +++++ rating.
You\'re the best! Please, write more now!!!
I can\'t wait to see what happened.
NOOOO!!!!!!! Not my dear Omi...
;_______________;___;
Omi!!! Nagi!!!!!
I love your update! I gave it another +++++ rating.
You\'re the best! Please, write more now!!!
I can\'t wait to see what happened.
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September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yeah! An Omi/Nagi story! I love this pairing ^__^
This is a very dark and distrubing beginning, poor Nagi. ;_____;
I love this a lot, please continue soon. I want to see what happen soon.
Ayami
my rating +++++
This is a very dark and distrubing beginning, poor Nagi. ;_____;
I love this a lot, please continue soon. I want to see what happen soon.
Ayami
my rating +++++