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for The Sway of Smoke

by Hoshiko

schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nhaaaaaaa

"what is it what you want, Soujirou?"... gods! I panicked when I read this line, what a perfect way to really start their 'relationship'.

PS: waiting for the sequel! ^~
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please finish this fic up!!!! this fic is so sexually (or mayb gayly???)exciting. the great plot help a lot 2.4 now this is the best Aoshi x Soujiro i\'ve yet 2 read. so... GANBATTE!!! n please son discontinue this fic
person kaesaku
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great. i like this. my first time to read an aoshiXsoujirou fic. i really liked it. was that the last chapter?
person Vail
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was simply cruel. Cruel, cruel, cruel...to leave me standing here for a month coming in this section every day to see if there were updates!

...just kidding, although I did visit the Rurouni Kenshin sect to search for this fic\'s updates...it was like manna was coming down from heaven when I saw this on the front page again. *sweatdrop*

Anywayl`please continue. It\'s wonderful. I printed out all the chapters already. ;)
person Susan Ann
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
6. What do you call it?

Interesting start with Shishio and Kamatari. Poor Soujiro being used as a little rag doll by his companions seems rather cruel. I am so glad that Aoshi has control of Soujiro\'s future instead of Shishio. The lemon was awesome, warm and sweet yet wonderfully personal. I liked the part where Aoshi didn\'t want to give up control, yet he let Soujiro do what he wanted instead of forcing him to succumb to his wishes. Wonderfully written, thanks...
person kia
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story, are you planning on continuing it? making more sou/aoshi stories? i hope so!

kia
person Draqonelle
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Anou. This is a really hot piece of fiction. Something about Soujiro fics makes me gummy inside... I don\'t know why but Shishio is just interesting in this, he and Yumi are sweet together.
Well I hope you at least get one more hot lemon between Aoshi and Soujiro... if that\'s not too much to ask... <3. Bye
person C0nfus3d
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! MORE MORE MOREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I BEG U PLEASEEEE!!!!!!i\'ll check up in atleast 3 months to see if u updated i really hope u do. i loovvee this story to death. plus u just gave me another rurouni kenshin slash couple to love. i hope others have as good a fic on this couple as u. ^^
person Jane Silver
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Aisho slash but its so hard to fine a lot of the time. Glad to fine an author that does these kind of stories. Please keep on writing.
person Akemi
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O UPDATE! PLEASE! :D This story is amazing. Wonderful job! ^.^

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