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for The Sway of Smoke

by Hoshiko

person R Dimeria
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I heart this story- you should write more.... ^.^
person Vail
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...very nice. Continue. ^^;;;
person Susan Ann
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter and Oh my poor Soujirou, thank goodness that Aoshi is there to take care of him. I would certainly let Aoshi take care of me. Can\'t wait to find out what happens next...
person Susan Ann
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start for your story, very intriguing. Sorry that it took me so long to review but life got in my way...
person Susan Ann
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the title to this chapter and what a wonderful gift it was for Aoshi. Love your story...
person Susan Ann
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The spark has been ignited and now the flaill ill burn until Aoshi can accept that he belongs with Soujirou. Brilliantly done...
person hargroove
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! you\'ve updated! but why so short???
person Jane Silver
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If I had a lot of time to think of how to discribe this wounderful story I could probable do a page or so. But at the moment I can only think of one word. Wow.
person terry
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I like the internal thoughts in this. i can\'t wait to read the rest!
person Adolph Hitler
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Schnell ach. Lovental bros lieben. And I mens ver vergen broder. Doktor Schtalin? Alarm! Menchoss? Zellan vei zamboa- Lueden est verboten, a den ascriber utz, kapieda hockuh, write more, God dammit!!!

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