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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got some words that don't really make sense in there. I'm not sure if they're typos or what, but they really pull the reader out of the story.
I really like the story so far and the mythology, but... Youji seems wildly OOC.
I can't wait for more. I'd like to see where you take this.
I really like the story so far and the mythology, but... Youji seems wildly OOC.
I can't wait for more. I'd like to see where you take this.
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November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::whimper::
::poke::
where\'s the rest? @_@ there\'s more right? right?
I think that what the world needs now is some more loverly kinkerly smut
Yesh. Get crackin!
^_^; seriously though, its just cruel to leave it there.
::poke::
where\'s the rest? @_@ there\'s more right? right?
I think that what the world needs now is some more loverly kinkerly smut
Yesh. Get crackin!
^_^; seriously though, its just cruel to leave it there.
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October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great fic, can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mam what a great story! i hope you are still working on it .i\'m looking forward to seeing what well happen next.you have me on pins and needles now.what a way to end the stroy that is so frustrating!