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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI
not to be pushy or anything, but.... are you going to update soon?? maybe?? please?? soon?? I\'m goin through withdrawal over here!!!!!!
not to be pushy or anything, but.... are you going to update soon?? maybe?? please?? soon?? I\'m goin through withdrawal over here!!!!!!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So damn sexy. *drools* You\'re too good at this!!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Checking in to see if you had updated. This story is fascinating. It gives so much depth to the characters. Ruroni Kensin is one of my all time favorite anime series. Please post a new chapter soon :):):)
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another great addition! Poor Kenshin, being left unfulfilled, tisk tisk, oh well, not like that hasn\'t happened to any of us once upon a time. All I have to say is welcome to the real world. K that\'s sadistic enough for me. Looking forward to another chapter soon
Fyyrrose~
Fyyrrose~
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is more of an observation than a review. but Kenshin sounds like a Dr. Seuss character with his talk, \"that there is, that I would not...\" God...it\'s odd. And Kinda a turn off. I know he\'s supposed to be polite and all but he\'s kinda like a semi-cardboard cutout in that speak of his. Then again Kenshin was never a colorful character for me when he\'s not in Battousai mode.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kenshin. He\'s not having much luck with his male lovers recently, is he.
Oh well, great chapter, (despite what you think)
Thanks for making Shishio better then SOMEONE. Baka Daishi!
Don\'t worry, if I have any BRILLIANT (yes I\'m being sarcastic) suggestions you\'ll know.
Maybe it\'s time Kenshin found Aoshi again.
If this chapter didn\'t have forshadowing in it I\'ll eat my keyboard.
I know you have a plot hiding somewhere.
More chapters PLEASE!
Ja!
Oh well, great chapter, (despite what you think)
Thanks for making Shishio better then SOMEONE. Baka Daishi!
Don\'t worry, if I have any BRILLIANT (yes I\'m being sarcastic) suggestions you\'ll know.
Maybe it\'s time Kenshin found Aoshi again.
If this chapter didn\'t have forshadowing in it I\'ll eat my keyboard.
I know you have a plot hiding somewhere.
More chapters PLEASE!
Ja!
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Again!!!
Please, keep sending more this way!!!!l yol you continue through the series, or stop just short of when he meets Kaoru??? (I\'d like to see his reaction to meeting Saito again, but thats just me :) anyway, whatever you want to give is more than welcome and greatly appreciated!!! [writegirl bows down in worship]
Please, keep sending more this way!!!!l yol you continue through the series, or stop just short of when he meets Kaoru??? (I\'d like to see his reaction to meeting Saito again, but thats just me :) anyway, whatever you want to give is more than welcome and greatly appreciated!!! [writegirl bows down in worship]
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm, not a bad chapterm, although weaker than any of the previous ones. It seemed just reallu unnecessary, you know? Like you went from an objective set of vignettes to more of a PWP-et\'s-see-how-many-individuals-Kenshin-can-guilt-screw mess. A wonderful fic, of course, so I hold it to I higher standard. This wasn\'t bad, per se, but definitely not your strongest chapter. I think the plot needs to be refocused a little so the earlier efforts aren\'tlost in minutia. Capice?
Thanks for the update babe!
Thanks for the update babe!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More chapters of sexy Kenshin.
I should have known Shishio wouldn\'t be any good. Oh well.
I liked Kenshin with a woman, wasn\'t exspecting it.
Are you planning on bringing Saito back?
Loved the last chapter.
Heck, I love the whole fic, prequal included.
I hope you have more planned.
Please hurry with more chapters.
Ja!
I should have known Shishio wouldn\'t be any good. Oh well.
I liked Kenshin with a woman, wasn\'t exspecting it.
Are you planning on bringing Saito back?
Loved the last chapter.
Heck, I love the whole fic, prequal included.
I hope you have more planned.
Please hurry with more chapters.
Ja!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That wasn\'t awkward at all. I think, in fact, that was one of your better vignettes.....the quality of it seemed a little more normal than the others. Ah, normal in the sense that the emotional response wasn\'t as exceptional. We weren\'t dealing with an outlierish individual, or a stoic warrior.....so it was easier to relate, as a reader, and yet still maintained that same level of intrigue. Very nicely done, can\'t WAIT for more!