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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Wow.
The grammar sucked, and my dick shriveled up at the sight of it.
The grammar sucked, and my dick shriveled up at the sight of it.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, where shall I start? The spelling stunk, the plot was so thin you could see daylight through it, the characters were unrealistic and hte auther was far too fond of exclamation marks. Obviously the work of a bored 13-year-old who thought he\'d write something to jack off to without actually putting any effort in
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, but it is generally a bad idea to use internet shorthand when writing a story. I am not sure that puting \"hahahaha\" and things like that into your writing is appropriate, but then again I am writing a professional novel. It does make it more interesting included, though. Perhaps more detail? All in all, a good story.
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,
WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK IS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN, A GUY BEING FUCKED IN THE ASS BY A GIRL IS REAALLY, REEAALLY FUCKED UP!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, my apologies for my harsh language you KINKY, OVERSEXED, SEX-DRIVEN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your Persistent Reader,
Miroku2
WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK IS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN, A GUY BEING FUCKED IN THE ASS BY A GIRL IS REAALLY, REEAALLY FUCKED UP!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, my apologies for my harsh language you KINKY, OVERSEXED, SEX-DRIVEN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your Persistent Reader,
Miroku2
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just cos im a season 3 fan, i like this story. It funny as well. Also i am a rukato fan so dont keep me waitin tong..ng.......please :)