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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg -sniffles- that was so beautiful -starts acting all emotional- poor kenshin!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good storyline... but it\'s lacking in places, if you had a good beta (goes for the shameless plug I beta often if you ever want help ^_^) it could be great, but if you just want advice... it tends to run on in places.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story s sos so good I\'m also crazy about the song concrete angel it really suits the story
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January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well i know i read this story before, but i can\'t remember if i Reviewed it already. If I haven\'t, then I love this story, I love concrete angel, and twas was a very creative way to write it.. If I have, then I just want to say, Please Please Please update soon?
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, i love the premise of this story... and i have to say that in my opinion \"concrete angel\" is one of the best songs ever. are you going to be doing the rest of the chapters in this story as songfics? Yet again i just wanted to tell you how great i think this story is so far.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First let me say that I like your fic.
You might want to put a little more into their relationship. I mean, they kind of met, fell in love, fucked (for lack of a betterword), and died within a two day period. Evedn fated love takes a little longer. Other then that, it was really good. I hope you plan to have more chapters. I think you are a talented author, just don\'t be in such a ruch to finish your story. Take your time with it. PLEASE write more.
Ja!
You might want to put a little more into their relationship. I mean, they kind of met, fell in love, fucked (for lack of a betterword), and died within a two day period. Evedn fated love takes a little longer. Other then that, it was really good. I hope you plan to have more chapters. I think you are a talented author, just don\'t be in such a ruch to finish your story. Take your time with it. PLEASE write more.
Ja!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this but I feel as if its moving a litle to fast.