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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much, but it seems to me that you cut something off: "...stepped back even more shaken than before; still pointing the gun at the bl " I'd really like to know what happened after that.*g*
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sad. Despite the fact that this was predominately a lemon, you put a lot of emotion into this. I like that. I thought it was great that Schuldig kept his end of the deal...even if it was so that he could keep Yohji for himself.
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'d definitely call that a plot, and a damn good one. Great story, great characterization and a great lemon - what else can a fangirl ask for?
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September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My favorite paring and done so well. You claim it\'s your first. I think you did a fine job. No complaints here.