rate_review Reviews

so beautifully writen, love the hisoka killing too ^___^

Okay. I totally understand - and can even appreciate - wanting to give Tsuzuki a \'dark\' side. It\'s certainly more than hinted that he has one. But... Tsuzuki -raped- Hisoka, and somehow we\'re expected to sympathize with him? Not only that, but Hisoka is \'bad\' for being justifiably upset that he was raped -again-, and this time by someone he trusted?

I don\'t mean to hurt your feelings - and I certainly hope that I don\'t - but I couldn\'t enjoy this story at all, because I just couldn\'t understand where you were coming from when you wrote it. Even if Tsuzuki did one day realize he was in love with Muraki (and I doubt that, too, but to each their own opinion), from the point of his rape of Hisoka on, I can no longer sympathize with him. He didn\'t even feel like Tsuzuki to me, because I don\'t think that guilt-ridden Tsuzuki could ever justify raping his partner. Nor do I think that raping Hisoka like that could -ever- be justified.

I -do- think this fic had an interesting angle going for it - there are very few stories out there that explore Tsuzuki\'s dark side. But it -is- a dark side, as in it isn\'t something -good-, and it should be treated as such. You wrote both him and Muraki as the \'heroes\' of this tale, but they\'re -not-. They\'re not \'victims\'. Rape, murder - those are -choices- people make. -Hisoka- was the victim, because of both of them. You can write a story wherein Tsuzuki does something terrible, but please, just remember that it -is- terrible. He stops being the hero the instant he crosses that line.

Ah!!! I LOVE YOUUUUUUU!!!! I LOVE THIS STORRYYYYY! WHY CANT I WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS?!!?! Seriously, I really liked this story... Tsuzuki gone MAD! As insane as Muraki! The only thing that\'s better than Muraki, is Tsuzuki, acting Muraki-like! OMFG, if I killed myself right now, I would die happy.

OMFG, I HAVE to review again! I can\'t help it! (*Kills self*) (*dies happy*)

(*Cries*)
(*kills self*)
(*Dies too f*g hag happy for her own good*)
Once again I am reading fanfiction way too late at night, and look how f***ing emotional it makes me!!! (*cries again*) Totally love this story.... Why can\'t I be Tsuzuki?! Why can\'t Muraki be real?! It\'s not fair!

Ha! I can review this story as many times as I F***ing want! And I\'m F***ing reviewing it again!!! Holy SHIT! Tsuzuki\'s EVIL! I LOVE it!!! (*goes into rushed babbling gushing nonsense happiness paragraph*) OMFGMurakiissosexyandTsuzukistotallymeantforhimandtheyshouldtotallygetmarriedandklivesomewherewheretheycankillandrapeandspreadtheirevilnessuponunsuspectingstupidpeopleandanywayIfuckingLOVEthisstoryespeciallysinceTsuzukifuckingrapedHisokaandhowMurakistotallyhealingallhisdeepsetwoundsandIlovehowyouandONLYyouseemtounderstandthatonlyMurakiismeantforhimbecausehe\'stheonlyoneevilenoughtounderstandTsuzukiandalltheevilthingshedoesandifyoufuckingbringHisokaintothepictureIllfuckingKILLyou!!
(*cough*) glances around at staring crowd...
WHAT?! Damn emotions! .....really.....I\'m not weird......

(*shrieks*) ARGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!! Hisoka! that stupid little Tsuzuki-stealing brat! Go away! let Muraki marry Tsuzuki in PEACE!! You too, Tatsumi, you TRAITOR!!! I always thought you were cool, but I guess not!
I really should stop reviewing your story with this nonsense, huh? btw, i think I\'ve reviewed every chapter except one.... Oh well....

(*in shock*)
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IKNEWIT!THATSTUPIDFUCKINGBASTARDHISOKAWOULDMESSTHINGSUPANDNOWLOOKWHATHE\'SDONE!FUCKINGKILLEDMYFAVORITECHARACTERINTHEENTIREWORLD,ANDJUSTWHENHEANDTSUZUKI-CHANWEREABOUTTOGETFUCKINGMARRIED!riesries*) I will never forgive for for this... I\'m going to write a fanfic whe where both Muraki and Tsuzuki rape and kill hisoka, as many times as I feel like writing! in fact, I hereby start a Hisoka-hate club! Why does everybody love the ugly little (*mumblemumblemumble*) anyway?!

If you don\'t write a sequel, i may go insane.
Either that or kill myself again. I\'m all ready for REVENGE!!! Kill Hisoka! Kill Tatsumi! Drag them down to HELL where they belong! And have fun writing it (....I hope you make a sequel!!!....) And that concludes my tirade of overly-Muraki-worshipping-way-too-emotional-Hisoka-hating reviews. Sorry to all those (*cough cough*) IDIOTS (*cough*) who actually LIKE that green-eyed little turd, and LONG LIVE MURAKI X TSUZUKI!!!!

That has got to be the greatest, most compulsive, awe-inspiring YnM fic I have ever read *bows down and worships*