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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, but u made a major mistake. i dont believe Hisoka is a virgin. wasnt he raped by Murazaki on the night he was murdered?
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fukin pimp
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot. ^_^ but, no is \'iie\'. \'ie\' means house.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like this because it is short sweet and to the point! I love PWP! :P (Not that yours is like that but I like it when authors don\'t beat around the bush too much and just say whatever they gotta say! :D) One thing you should do however is go back thru this and check every paragraph because there are multiple instances where your words are overlapping one another. Makes it kinda hard to read. O.o?
Koneko
Koneko
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It was great. I almost wasn’t gonna read it till I saw it actually had some form of plot! The ones with plots are best, not that theres anything completely erroneous with the ones without, but there boring…! Have you tried longer Fics? Making something longer would make those parts all the more cute. ^_^ Hisoka+Tsuzuki ^_^
Although I suggest you re read your Fics even after youve submitted them, because if you reread it now there are some spelling errors that you would notes and go o.O wtf?! ^_^
Although I suggest you re read your Fics even after youve submitted them, because if you reread it now there are some spelling errors that you would notes and go o.O wtf?! ^_^
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the pairing so no matter what you write I would love it! Like this one it is prefect! I love the story and the result! You write clearly and you quickly bring me to the point I want, sex! Thank you!! You are truely talented and I appreciate you sahring your gift with me.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haa.. so cute... I have notised that its very hard to find a cute and not overly angsty fic with tsusuki/hisoka starring:) but this is cute and sweet and wonderful fic!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I truely loved your story! I really wish there was more....
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I love it. Keep it cuming! ^_^
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keeheehee *blush* that was good! you should write more!