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for A Birthday to Remember

by ldkelly

person dawnmm
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed this. not being aware of the anime/manga wasnt sure of the characters but it was well done
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I'll admit it. I'm a D fangirl. And this story made me giggle several times...and I don't giggle. But it was so cute that it was hard not to! Great job, though you might want to run it through grammar check just once. A couple of incorrect homophones caught my eye. I'm still giggling at the situation, though...I love D so much, and you portrayed him very well.

^_^

a/j
person kelly
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! that was a good story, i'm glad i finally got to reading it. ^_^
person InspectorZenigata
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ^^ i enjoyed that much
person VEN
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS HOW IT REALLY SHOULD HAVE BEEN!!!!! LEON AND D TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVERYONE KNOWS THAT!!!!!
person Lyric
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really nice story. I hope you write more and longer stories on PSOH.
I like really long stories...that are good of course. but i also enjoy nice
short stories like this one. .............I luv D and Leon! hehe ;)
person pinky01
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i really enjoyed this fic. it kept in character and made everything fit nicely. it was nice that you broke it up into installments. i really enjoyed it..you are a good writier :P
person Weaver
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...uke Leon! That is just so cute! ^-^ Hope you write more! ^_^
person Fluffy-chan
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written, and I couldn\'t find any grammar or spelling mistakes, but I am fairly sure Leon\'s mother died giving birth to Chris. I don\'t know what happened to his dad, as far as I know, the manga hasn\'t said yet, if it wil will. Go ahead and ignore/correct me if I\'m wrong, though! I make mistakes like this all the time ^_^
person warconq
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is so cute! I really like this story. I never saw the anima Pet ShpHorrHorrors but I did read the manga and I really like it. Excellent story.

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